In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Over the decades, humans have made a remarkable progress in their life.human achievements have been quite audacious.they have made impossible tjings possible.the writer states that in any fiels it is impossible to make a significant contributionwitjout being first influenced by acheivements within tha field.to some extent the idea stated by author is appropriate.
Firstly,in any field there is always a first time for any discovery.for example it was NASA who first landed a spacecraft on moon.this achievement was truly one of its kind.there were no past achievements in this field.So here this example contradicts the authors claim.While this example also proved to be a great motivation for all the individuals in the field .they believed that they can too do it.So here the authors claim is accepted
Secondly,past achievements also help in the moral boost of a individual. they take inspiration and futherdo more advances in the field.Since there are some achievements made in that field ,making advaces in the field seems possible.
As a summary, the humanity has shown that is capable to change "impossible" parts of the life to "possible" facets while there is no previous experience about it; on the other hand, he/she could utilize previous experience to progress some field of study.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'remarkable progress'.
Suggestion: remarkable progress
Over the decades, humans have made a remarkable progress in their life.human achievements have b...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... idea stated by author is appropriate. Firstly,in any field there is always a f...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...d by author is appropriate. Firstly,in any field there is always a first time ...
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Line 2, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...were no past achievements in this field.So here this example contradicts the autho...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...s example contradicts the authors claim.While this example also proved to be a great ...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ion for all the individuals in the field .they believed that they can too do it.So...
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Line 2, column 396, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to do'?
Suggestion: to do
... the field .they believed that they can too do it.So here the authors claim is accepte...
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Line 2, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... .they believed that they can too do it.So here the authors claim is accepted ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....So here the authors claim is accepted Secondly,past achievements also help in ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , past
... authors claim is accepted Secondly,past achievements also help in the moral boo...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...vements also help in the moral boost of a individual. they take inspiration and f...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...elp in the moral boost of a individual. they take inspiration and futherdo more adva...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Since
...and futherdo more advances in the field.Since there are some achievements made in tha...
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Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...are some achievements made in that field ,making advaces in the field seems possib...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 14.8657303371 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 206.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42233009709 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.52983393232 2.79657885939 126% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 215.323595506 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.4932671777 128% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 23.0359550562 221% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.820487692 60.3974514979 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 279.25 118.986275619 235% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 23.4991977007 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.5 5.21951772744 431% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341018023565 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191234754317 0.0831039109588 230% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794764531274 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190740486105 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815510854837 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 14.1392134831 211% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 48.8420337079 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 12.1743820225 200% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 12.1639044944 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.69 8.38706741573 127% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 100.480337079 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 11.2143820225 200% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.