In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement

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In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

It is axiomatic that improvement in various fields of science has been playing a pivotal role in the development of all societies. An unavoidable question which has always been a controversial topic and has provoked heated debates is whether it is impossible to make a considerable impact on any field of endeavor without first being strongly affected by past achievements within that field. Whether one agrees or disagrees depends on the lens through which one is looking. Both adherents and opponents provide substantial reasons for the option they support. So far as I am concerned, I contend that achievements and experiences within a particular field are the backbones of future investigations and significant innovations. To shed light on my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most important reasons.

The first focal point that prompts me to hold this idea is that past achievements within a field could be inspiring for most of the future new ideas. It is no secret that nowadays most of the fields of study are complicated, and finding a new subject for research is not easy for everyone except professionals who have a great background in that special field. Therefore, having huge information about past achievements within a field helps scientists to have a broader perspective about that field, so this wide sight would help them through their future innovations to make a significant contribution to that field. Also, if researchers get influenced by past achievements, it would help them to do their researches more time effective and more accurate because, under this circumstances, researchers are aware of all lacks and faults of past researches, so they will not repeat the past mistakes, and they will get to their answer faster. For the purpose of illustration, when great scientists of chemistry tried to develop an atomic model, they looked into the past achievements and results, and then they compared the past models with the real behavior of subatomic particles. Hence, they understood the lacks and faults of the previous models, and owing to this information about past results, they could easily use their knowledge to establish a new atomic model, which was precisely in accord with real atomic behavior. So, the more information about past achievements, the more success in significant innovations.

Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance on this issue is that information is the key point of success in any field of study or profession. It is crystal clear that nowadays professions and companies related to specific fields of science are very competitive, and significant contribution belongs to the company which has collected more data about previous achievements, and has made better products because limited knowledge will stop the other managers and professionals from thinking wider and more profound about their work. Moreover, if startups get influenced by past achievements, their products would be more reliable for sponsors who seek to contribute in profitable businesses because not only would this information help the startups to improve past achievements and make new significant ideas, but also it can provide them the knowledge to analyze other companies’ products. By means of this information about past achievements, companies and startups can find weaknesses and strengths of others’ products, so they would win the competition easily, and make a significant contribution in that field.

To make a long story short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that it is impossible to make a significant impact on any field of endeavor without first being influenced by past achievements within that field because past achievements are inspiring for the scientist to define a new subject for their researches. Also, having information about past works will make future investigations more time effective. Furthermore, being influenced by past achievements can help professionals, companies, or startups to improve their ideas and products, and their business would thrive by analyzing others’ products to make a significant contribution to that field.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ective and more accurate because, under this circumstances, researchers are aware of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 104.0 58.6224719101 177% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3544.0 2235.4752809 159% => OK
No of words: 657.0 442.535393258 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39421613394 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.06280665599 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14542020008 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 281.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.427701674277 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1076.4 704.065955056 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.77640449438 563% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.389225824 60.3974514979 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.2 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.85 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322674912681 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111230008122 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924331958748 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240804398723 0.150359130593 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691021031119 0.0667264976115 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 14.1392134831 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 100.480337079 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.


Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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