In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author prompt that, to achieve something it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field. Every individual as its own potential to achive something and which differs from one to another. Everyperson as inspired to do work with past reference, like from ancestors or the other, without their support ,it us difficult to achieve.
There are people who are inspired from the work of past achivements, and they do work with great zeal to accomplish. If they are not inspired from the past work then the innovation and technology will not be so developed.For example, the Wright Brothers who have invented first aeroplane to fly without engine , will not be progressed as it is now with luxury and saftey, if other people have not inspired by there past work.
Alternately, there are people who have started their own Enterprise without any help and become inspiration for the future enterprise. For example, Steve Jobs the APPLE CEO, who is the college dropout, who as give such a excellent work in the field of technology. These kind of people are inspiration for the generation.
In all,it is impossible to achieve without stongly influenced by past achievements is true to some extent.
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- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. "Write a response in which you discuss 50
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tors or the other, without their support ,it us difficult to achieve. There are p...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...and technology will not be so developed.For example, the Wright Brothers who have i...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ed first aeroplane to fly without engine , will not be progressed as it is now wit...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...s the college dropout, who as give such a excellent work in the field of technolo...
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Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ellent work in the field of technology. These kind of people are inspiration for the gener...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... inspiration for the generation. In all,it is impossible to achieve without stong...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all,it is impossible to achieve without stongly influenced by past achievements ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227467811159 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.154506437768 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0901287553648 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0472103004292 0.0497285424764 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0429184549356 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1330472103 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0429184549356 0.0406280797675 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86419086609 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0429184549356 0.030933414821 139% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0815450643777 0.0997080785238 82% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00858369098712 0.0249443105267 34% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0300429184549 0.0148568991511 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1272.0 2732.02544248 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 211.0 452.878318584 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02843601896 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.58838876751 83% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345971563981 0.366273622748 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.270142180095 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203791469194 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.14691943128 0.132149295362 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86419086609 2.79330140395 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 219.290929204 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559241706161 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 51.9136675567 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 23.4444444444 23.380412469 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9634136334 59.4972553346 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 23.380412469 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.674092028746 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 50.4586624539 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.64912280702 1.64882698954 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387155365946 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.162140383007 0.123202303941 132% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0938726146517 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.700334332784 0.547984918172 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148063485376 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18867717317 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134214745692 0.0892212321368 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219219235856 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122754156799 0.0692045440612 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264007154888 0.275328986314 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110733326572 0.0653680567796 169% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.