In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
An individual tends to seek inspiration for most aspects of life be it something complex like an invention or art or even raising a child or something as trivial as dressing up for a occassion. without any inspiration it is as if there is no template to follow, no benchmark to overcome. To ace a trend and bring about something of significance in a field of endeavour one must not only value its historical accolades but also gain insight from it.
To be inspired is to be motivated it gives birth to an unprecedented will to thrive, to improve. In order to develop a sense of such dedication, it is imperative that one appreciates the past efforts made by others in the field but also learn from them. Putting forth an attempt without any inspiration is like an artist diving into work without a mood board, like going in point-blank.
Critics may associate this sort of influence with dearth of imagination or creativity, but the point here is totally different. A proponent of a field of work -art, sports, politics, science-must treat any of his seniors and their contributions as a foundation for his own. he should follow their footsteps, learn from their mistakes but at the same bring something of original and worthy to the table. A junior cricketer keenly observes his seniors play on the field and strives to imbibe their skills, so that later when he steps into their shoes, he does not stumble upon the same obstacles.
Today a Virat Kohli is only touted to be a legend comparable to Sachin Tendulkar because he was able to applaud and gain inspiration from his legendary predecessors in the cricket world. A successful civilization is built only when the present learns from the past, the current generation value the contributions of their ancestors. like they say, whatever you do in life,stay inspired.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...something as trivial as dressing up for a occassion. without any inspiration it i...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
...trivial as dressing up for a occassion. without any inspiration it is as if there is no...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...tributions as a foundation for his own. he should follow their footsteps, learn fr...
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Line 7, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...e the contributions of their ancestors. like they say, whatever you do in life,stay ...
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Line 7, column 372, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , stay
.... like they say, whatever you do in life,stay inspired.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83439490446 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87872018435 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579617834395 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5218462545 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.769230769 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166165328572 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554273621493 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0360584393179 0.0758088955206 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961395838207 0.150359130593 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322664232158 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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