In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions.
An expert is person who is very knowledgeable and skilful a field of inquiry,developing such skill is very tedious and difficult task and would take years to develop it.It has been also observed that experts in the field are the ones usually leading and shaping the every evolving field of inquiry.Hence is do not agree that beginners are more likely to deliver important contribution to any field of inquiry.
To begin with, A field of inquiry is large,varied and sometimes convoluted, it takes time to understand many aspects of the field such as convention, area of active research , limitations and shortcoming of existing solution to problems ect.The Expert of the field have already spent considerable amount of time helped worked on understanding these nuances.For example, Goodyear an chemist by profession is the inventor of artificial rubber, attributed his success in this creation to his deep understanding of reaction between rubber and sulphur compounds. We have to keep in mind that many people were trying to come up with a solution to the problem ,However Goodyears expertises finally let to the solution.
Additionally,people who are called expert would have experienced set of failures during there years of study.Hence, are more aware of the common pitfalls in the field of study. Additionally experts would have developed a general idea regarding the problem and would be in position to foretell the challenges in the problem which first need attention to. For example, Today world is able to experience Virtual reality as a household commodity, we might wonder why it has take so long for the technology to mature, Occulus is a VR company which might appear a new company to the end user , however it is a brain child of an industry veteran,John carmak,The company attributes the success to him as He knew all the problems needs to solved first before the technology reaches the end customer.
Even if experts in one field dedicate there life to a field of inquiry, its not uncommon that when the expert shifts to other fields he brings the treasure trove of knowledge. Tomas mark worked in Nasa in developing face shields for astronauts for deep space programs.He went to create a new company which manufactured a special type of reading glasses, scratch resistant glasses,However the underlying idea for these glasses was developed in Nasa and it manifested it self into a new use of common people
However,there are also case studies where beginner or new comers have provided ground shattering contribution to what seemed like as mature industry,car manufacturing industry is a mature industry with decades of expertise, and the idea of electric car was considered laughable.However,A newcomer Elon Musk revolutionized the car industry by starting an electric car company called "Thesla",today this company is considered to be the future of car industry.
To sum it up, Even though there are case where new comers have disrupted a field of inquiry i tend belive that important contribution are made by people who have spent decades of there life in the said field of study.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.298747763864 0.240241500013 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.171735241503 0.157235817809 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0733452593918 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0447227191413 0.0497285424764 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0268336314848 0.0444667217837 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.112701252236 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.046511627907 0.0406280797675 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.17744175423 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0429338103757 0.030933414821 139% => OK
Particles: 0.00357781753131 0.0016655270985 215% => OK
Determiners: 0.093023255814 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0107334525939 0.0249443105267 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0214669051878 0.0148568991511 144% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3121.0 2732.02544248 114% => OK
No of words: 510.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11960784314 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.36862745098 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290196078431 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.200843997647 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.13137254902 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17744175423 2.79330140395 114% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 219.290929204 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523529411765 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 63.1248572677 55.4138127331 114% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6194690265 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 56.6666666667 23.380412469 242% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 212.007395632 59.4972553346 356% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 346.777777778 141.124799967 246% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.6666666667 23.380412469 242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 0.674092028746 198% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.21349557522 537% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 85.6862745098 51.4728631049 166% => OK
Elegance: 1.88235294118 1.64882698954 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500048619941 0.391690518653 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161922102869 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735828900449 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.769035251289 0.547984918172 140% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.195880895243 0.149214159877 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.272795528326 0.161403998019 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718873703288 0.0892212321368 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.327695049669 0.385218514788 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128553746308 0.0692045440612 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303500701175 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935531101511 0.0653680567796 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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