In any field of inquiry, the beginner is more likely to make important contributions than an expert. I agree with this statement, not completely though. The beginner tends to see and analyze things from a fresh and unbiased point of view though this does not hold true for all cases.
Let us take an example of a simple robbery case where the matter revolves around finding the thief and the investigation is supposed to proceed. We know that somebody who is an expert has to be somebody experienced and experience comes with time so it is possible that an expert might be having his own set of conventions that he has been following for a long time and may not be that effective in recent problems where as a beginner would comapritively have a new, updated and fresh mindset towards solving a problem and hence would have important contributions to make.
It is not always necessary that the expert would always have the most to offer to any inquiry or case. We might just call an old person an expert of, say, cooking but then we know how a beginner would always come up with new ways of how things can be done. As the technology is expanding day by day its the beginner, obviously who has the dedication and will, is preferred over experts.
But there is a reason why it is said "take experts' advice". In the end, maybe when everything is done, people have made their contributions in solving the problem statement, everyone still hopes to get the final verdict on what they have done and it is the experts that they go to. Therefore the contributions that the expert make is undoubtedly an important one. Let there be a personal problem with one of the colleague in office, that particular person would always want somebody rational and with a problem solving skill to hear him out and solve his problem. An expert in this case would be a person who has heard enough people tell him his problems and has also given them correct advice. He should be outspoken and have a sense of judgement amalgamated with a sense of rationalism. And hence, it is definitely of good use to consider an expert and an expert would be better than considering a beginner.
There have been times in history when a student or disciple of somebody has made more contributions than the teacher therefore, we cannot say that it is just the beginner or the expert that would make important contributions every single time. It varies from field to field, situation to situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, may, so, still, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2045.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 437.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67963386728 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66574969354 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491990846682 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 651.6 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.1831218305 60.3974514979 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.294117647 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155551520167 0.243740707755 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674995148328 0.0831039109588 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727794250846 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111511148124 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654307184707 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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