True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself. I completely agree with the statement above. Success is nothing but satisfaction that comes from within after you achieve what you have desired for. I believe it is not something that a third person could decide for somebody whether the person is successful.
For example, If a person aspires to be a painter, what success means to him is reaching the goal what he has aimed for. It could merely be selling a painting or getting his painting put up in an exhibition. It is absolutely determined by the goal he has set for himself. If the person has chosen the career that he is passionate about success is something that just comes along the happiness one gets by pursuing what they love. It is nothing that is measured in terms of money or status or bank balance and no matter what people in the society tell him he would always be proud of himself and nothing one would ever say that could make him feel small about himself.
There could be a film that portrays a social issue but is not encouraged by the audience as it is not something everyone would understand. It aims to target discerning people. This does not imply that that particular movie maker is not successful.
A person is working in a company and aims to get promoted to a higher level but someone else gets that promotion. This does not mean he is not successful. Success should never me quantified on a scale set by the awards and promotions in the society.
Let us consider, if one chooses a different path other than what they really want to do, then it inhibits them from feeling proud about themselves. They would be oblivious to the word 'success' for the rest of their lives. No matter where they reach, it would never satiate their needs. Success for such people would always be materialistic and hence, they could never have enough of it. For example, if one is a talented dancer and wants to build a career in that particular field but is pursuing engineering under parental pressure, might become ''successful'' but will still never be satisfied. It is all about where one's propensity is towards.
Therefore, it is true success only if it had been achieved going on a path that you chose for yourself and not somebody else. Nothing could stop a man from being successful given he has a clear picture of what he wants to do in his mind, does not
vacillate from one option to the other and has a complete sense of sincerity and responsibility.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, still, then, therefore, third, for example, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2104.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 455.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62417582418 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56849273563 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481318681319 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.3277943459 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4782608696 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7826086957 23.4991977007 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5652173913 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244626771001 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797988477333 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100474882793 0.0758088955206 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121565162457 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128543053848 0.0667264976115 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.1639044944 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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