The people are voracious for getting new things, new ideas, new attempt and and new tests. Newly developed things and ideas are always in the center of attraction and the center of discussion. The People feel bored having same thing all the time. The canny people understand this fact and present something new or different than existing one and got public attraction. So, I strongly support the argument that the leading voices come from the people who are motivated by the desire to present opinion and ideas that differ from those held by the majority.
In any sector the leading voice will be that which are different than the majority. I would like to present here some examples. The Apple company present smart phone while majority of phone company were launching ancient model phone. Even the product of Apple was very expensive, people were attracted to have enjoy with latest technology. And finally Apple became the leading company.The Lord Buddha is praised by all because of his unique philosophy about religion. Likewise, Mahatma Gandhi, the freedom fighter of the India, had presented the theory of peace revolution when India was colonized by British. The rest of the contemporary leader and people were so anger with English and wants to do great war to cast away to them from India. However, the Gandhi's perspective of peace revolution got public attraction and became leading idea. Finally, his innovative idea of revolution swept out the English colony from the India. Still his theory of peace revolution is popular in the name of Gandhigiri.
In the sector of science and technology, among the various invention the Nano technology got lots of public attraction and became leading technology. If we see the politics of any country, the politicians who present new road map of development are getting majority from the election. We can feel that in television add of any product wants to show their product is different than others. Why? It is because they business people know that if they can present there product as different than existing one, it will be the leading product.
It does not mean that the idea led by conviction can be ignored completely. Some altruistic work will be praised equally and can be a leading voice even many people depicts that idea. For instance, the democratic movement of many country were found common goal of majority people. Even, those courage of democratic movement were came from conviction of majority people, the voice of movement were found leading voice.
Making a long story short, the leading voice in any sector are the one which arises from the willingness to present ideas unique than the majority.Sometime even the idea arise from conviction of majority people can be a leading voice; especially in the field of altruistic work.
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- "According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies ac 29
- In any given field, the leading voices come from people who are motivated not by conviction but by the desire to present opinions and ideas that differ from those held by the majority. 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: and
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Message: Use past participle here: 'enjoyed'.
Suggestion: enjoyed
...xpensive, people were attracted to have enjoy with latest technology. And finally App...
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Suggestion: with the latest
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Suggestion: Still,
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun country seems to be countable; consider using: 'many countries'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, likewise, so, still, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 58.6224719101 99% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02569593148 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55220562638 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477516059957 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 754.2 704.065955056 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2436181783 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7916666667 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4583333333 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410373064989 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106031062092 0.0831039109588 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143783123183 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23587936314 0.150359130593 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918309063648 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.