Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.

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...ama had many negative opinions regarding the bin laden arrest,many suggest that t...
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...nsider ghandhi a great leader from India ,fought for indian independence from Bri...
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... he did not adhere to his idea. Finally,A wise leader will not shift his decision...
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...ft his decision with the popular opinion,There are many leaders in history who change...
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...pinion,There are many leaders in history who changed their decision based on oth...
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...s in history who changed their decision based on others opinions,and those decis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for instance, as well as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2731.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 492.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55081300813 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70967865282 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25500055107 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497967479675 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 860.4 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 70.0 23.0359550562 304% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 282.322438328 60.3974514979 467% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 390.142857143 118.986275619 328% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 70.2857142857 23.4991977007 299% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.4285714286 5.21951772744 315% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 68.0 7.80617977528 871% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24480097218 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140125353993 0.0831039109588 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816423250999 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142092424643 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827690487446 0.0667264976115 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.9 14.1392134831 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -8.03 48.8420337079 -16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.09 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.6 8.38706741573 138% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 30.0 11.2143820225 268% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.7820224719 255% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.