In any profession—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
The statements asserts that those who are in power in any profession should step down after a period of five years. Surely making leaders stepping down would seem like an easy solution to prevent corruption and lacking of initiatives, I think it is an overstretch to claim that all professions should step down for revitalization.
There are a few fundamental flaws for perennial leadership, as it has been exemplified by countless historic events, with the most recent and balant one being dictatorship of the North Korean Royal Kim family. We do not however need to discuss that far of an extreme, flaws of permanent leadership is evident even in many everyday scenarios. It would seem obvious that when leaders have no fear of losing their power, they tend to abuse their power. Although we ought to believe the people appointed as leaders are altruistic, without refrainment from morality and the need to please the people, even the most beneficent people will eventually become corrupted from the wielding of power.
It may be true that an individual can do so much even to change the world, there are nevertheless limits to the human brain. This is why in the contemporary society we embrace teamwork to tackle the toughest problems. A leader can only bring so much light to creativity, their initiatives and imaginations would eventually burn out. In this global village where intellect and creativity is so demanding, where ideas are required so oftenly, we need new leaders with new creative thinking or we may lose to the relentlessly progressing world.
However, there are a few professions that lie outside of this scope. These professions require leaders with immense experience and changing of leadership would take too big of a tole toe the infrastructure due to the steep learning curve of the job. This is evident as new leaders often lack existing skills to cope with problems, and they are not necessarily immediately welcomed by all the co-workers. An example of this would be TSMC, Taiwan’s greatest microchip company. Founded only 30 years ago, TSMC has surpassed IT giants such as Intel and Samsung in producing the most advanced 7nm microchips. The CEO of TSMC only stepped down last year, his 29 years of “dictatorship” however proved beneficial to the company. The field of IT thus seem too complex to be fitting for a leadership change every 5 years or so.
In conclusion, it is fundamentally flawed for anyone to be on leadership for too long as it is human nature to be allured into the inevitable abyss of corruption and staleness. Although there are exceptions to this rule as exemplified by IT giants such as TSMC, these exceptions seem so meager compared to the catastrophic examples such as Kim family that perennial leadership can lead to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'assert'.
Suggestion: assert
The statements asserts that those who are in power in any prof...
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Line 1, column 250, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...d lacking of initiatives, I think it is an overstretch to claim that all professions should st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2330.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 466.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00278318956 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.679810707 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.631578947 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5263157895 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84210526316 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138582606043 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507585135604 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126508823714 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10034462746 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158150807515 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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