Claim: In any field-business, politics, education, government- those in power should step down after five years. Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
Many would say that those who have power in any field should step down after five years. In some field that integrity of authorities is important, the argument would be true. However, I firmly believe that aside from the area of politics and government new leadership could be to the surest path to success for any enterprise.
Admittedly, the five years regulation would be necessary in politics and government. Those who work for government offices are susceptible to economical seduces because lobbists are everywhere. The more one serves for the government, the more they are exposed to the corruptions. In this regard, it would be beneficial to prevent this corruption by compelling anyone to resign its position in every five years.
However, it does not necessarily indicate that any corporation can revive with a new leader. In the case of business, we can easily observe those who run an enterprise during one’s entire life. When a company set vision and misson in a right direction, the renovation through new leadership does not require, rather persistence endeavors with one leader can be more advantageous. For example, Warren Buffet who started and has continued his own investment company illustrates the merits of extended leadership. He is renowned by setting a principle of the investment-only investing with a long-term value of the stocks far from being myopic and making short-sighted decision, which teaches us a corporation can be successful without change of leadership.
In conclusion, despite the benefits of five years regulation in politics, I disagree with the given both reason and claim because revitalization through new leadership does not always ensure the success for the any enterprise in any field.
- Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country. 66
- People learn more by watching television than by reading books 83
- Although innovations such as video, computers, and the internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning. 66
- Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Video games offer benefits to children Provide reason and examples to support your stance 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ss for the any enterprise in any field.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 2235.4752809 66% => OK
No of words: 278.0 442.535393258 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28417266187 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00980059852 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4233895071 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387514588017 0.243740707755 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121778371464 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126084819189 0.0758088955206 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252393927263 0.150359130593 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145407212932 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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