All college students should take a public speaking course that teaches how to speak well in front of many people before graduation
One can say that all college students should take a public speaking course before graduation. For some students, it is beneficial to learn how to speak well in front of the public. In my opinion, however, this program could be unnecessary and stressful for some students. I believe there is no reason to compel a speaking course for all students.
Of course, it is undeniable that some students could benefit from speaking training programs. It will offer valuable opportunities for those who want to get a job requiring public speech, such as politicians, educators, or reporters. Students can learn how to deliver their opinion effectively and how to control nervous in front of listeners.
However, there are also many jobs that never demanding public speaking. In this case, learning from a speaking course will be useless. Imagine students in art major having few opportunities to speak in front of many people. Instead, they are more likely to interact with the public by exhibiting their artistic pieces. It is more beneficial for them to learn how to arrange their pieces in the exhibition room to boost aesthetic moods than a speaking course.
Aside from the reason above, speech programs might be too stressful for some students. There are many people who have a phobia to get attention from people. For them, compulsory speech experience could cause dangerous situations threatening mental health. According to recent statistics, eleven percent of Americans have a phobia related to public speaking. Most of them suffer from extreme nervous, and it might lead to faint without immediate treatment. In this regard, public speaking courses might cause serious health accidents in college.
In sum, despite some benefits public speaking courses have, mandatory speaking courses deems irrational since it could be a burden for some students. Also, speech ability is not necessary for all jobs. Therefore, It will be wise to implement a public speaking course not as a requirement but as a recommendation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, therefore, well, of course, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 22.412803532 103% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.01324503311 160% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1373.03311258 124% => OK
No of words: 325.0 270.72406181 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22461538462 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76218933834 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.169000591 49.2860985944 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 110.228320801 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4761904762 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52380952381 7.06452816374 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37453375714 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119097347159 0.0996497079465 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112836663299 0.0662205650399 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22536202694 0.162205337803 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100335431344 0.0443174109184 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 63.6247240618 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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