To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.
The statement claim that to be an effective leader, must have to maintain the highest ethical and moral standard. I agree with this statement insofar as by maintaining the best ethical and moral standard, public trustness and belief will emphasize on the person can help to make an effective leader. Also he can be the example of an ideal society by maintaining the best moral ethics can make a great leader. But it is difficult to maintain the highest moral ethics and this is not the only factor to be a great leader. Maintain the highest ethical standard can more likely to increase cynic and this can affect badly on his daily life.
One compelling argument in favor on my position is by maintaining the best moral standard, a person can be the example of a society can more likely make a hero of this society. This can lead to be a effective and great leader. For example, sheik mujibur rahman, a great leader of bangladesh was maintain the highest moral standard though the opposite party leader harashed him in various way. This was made him an ideal and most effective leader in bangladesh.
Second argument is, maintain the high moral standard can lead to increase the public trustness to the person as well as the political party can help to be the leader of this political party and the society. Because maintaining the high standard moral can affect positively toword the society. For example, if one person maintain the ebst moral ethics then he can gain the trust from the public and also can help to attribute his party toword the public can emphasize more likely to be the leader of this political party.
Moreover, if any person maintain the best moral standard then he can change the whole society and others will be affect and likely maintain the moral standard and overall every people of this society will maintain the best moral standard and the moral revoulation will be started and this will make him the leader of this revoulationary society. He will be the pioneer of this scoiety.
However, every person of the society have personal and public life. It is hard to maintain the best moral standard in both public and privet life. Also maintain the best ethical standard are more likely lead to increase the cynic. Scrutinize in every times may lead to decrease less likely to hold the great leader in society. Then, maintain the best moral ethics can lead more scrutinize the media can decrease his reputation for simple reason. This will affect badly on him and his political party. Moreover, only maintaining the moral ethics is not the essential factor to be the great leader in the society. Sometimes the person to be the fawning and sometime have to mask the real face toword the public be the best and ideal leader.
In conclusion, maintaining the highest ethical and moral standard is one of the best way to be the great leader in society. Nontheless there are sevaral factors that are needed to be an effective leader. It is not essential to maintain the moral standard every time because sometime this can impede to thrive the society. To be a great and effective leader, must have to know when should be maintained the ethical standard and when not.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'claims'.
Suggestion: claims
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'maintained'.
Suggestion: maintained
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'maintains'.
Suggestion: maintains
...rd in both public and privet life. Also maintain the best ethical standard are more like...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 12.4196629213 234% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2635.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 556.0 442.535393258 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73920863309 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85588840946 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40120981511 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.289568345324 0.4932671777 59% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 841.5 704.065955056 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3428777501 60.3974514979 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.346153846 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88461538462 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.509410331577 0.243740707755 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214389161986 0.0831039109588 258% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134970726905 0.0758088955206 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.364548970733 0.150359130593 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133151343988 0.0667264976115 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.38706741573 81% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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