In the global scenario, there are diffrent ideology which governs the nations, and these are formed to make better human kind and society. Although we have different perspective to view world but we have common motto to make the society in moral boundries. To make this possible, Leaders also must posses such kinds of standards.And Effective leaders are those who makes the society better. According to the prompts, To be an effective leader who uplift the status of society must maintain highest ethical and moral standards. And I strongly agree on this prompts because of these two reasons.
To begin, Leader is the mirror of the society. Leader is the representative of the whole society, so if you want to bring society in higher level you must be on that level atleast in mind set. For instance, In Pakistan The formor primeminister was proved guilty for corruptions which impair the image of the pakistan in world. Which reults bad impact on economic status of pakistan. If the leader was bounded and possessed high moral and ethical values, it would not be the case for them. Also, In Nepal there are a lot of leaders, who are charged for immoral activities, and which breaks the develpoment of their country. So, Above these examples suggests that to be effective leader, whom public can blindly supports the must be clean from those depraved acitivities.
Seconldy, To make society free from criminal acitivites, we have to choose the effective leaders. These leaders are the sole reason behind the constuction of the society. The leaderss having highest ethical and moral values only can sanction the law against those criminal activities. For instance, In USA, Joe Biden having no negative perception is growing his country by approving the laws regarding criminals activities. So for free criminal society we must elect those leaders having better ethical and moral standards.
Lastly, For better society we need better leader and for better leader you must possessed hihghest ethical and moral standards.
- It is possible to pass laws that control or place limits on people s behavior but legislation cannot reform human nature Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts and minds 50
- Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance 68
- To be an effective leader a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards 50
- Some people believe that our ever increasing use of technology significantly reduces our opportunities for human interaction Other people believe that technology provides us with new and better ways to communicate and connect with one another 66
- The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise Currently the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away 71
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
...lso must posses such kinds of standards.And Effective leaders are those who makes t...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'maintain the highest'.
Suggestion: maintain the highest
...r who uplift the status of society must maintain highest ethical and moral standards. And I stro...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...oral standards. And I strongly agree on this prompts because of these two reasons. ...
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Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...air the image of the pakistan in world. Which reults bad impact on economic status of...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'support'
Suggestion: support
...fective leader, whom public can blindly supports the must be clean from those depraved a...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'having the highest'.
Suggestion: having the highest
...onstuction of the society. The leaderss having highest ethical and moral values only can sanct...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, regarding, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 332.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09638554217 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56732542152 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518072289157 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1323340311 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310102490866 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102559725169 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119760453715 0.0758088955206 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194002305694 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409803355284 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.