the benefits of technology come at a price: increasing dependence will result in an overall weakening of human abilities
Science and Technology have always advanced us ,which has made some skills ,beliefs and concepts obselete and it is the principle of Science that with discoveries of new things some other things become invalid.
Technology has many benefits and disadvantages as well evaluating them will give us the solution for the increasing depenednce on technology.
Now we are constantly depedend on technology to carry out day to day work. Like we wake up with the sound of alarm, use microwaves for cooking , perform daily works on laptops,computers. This has made of life easy than the earlier generations.
Now banks have become digitalised which has reduced human labour required and is widely accesible to consumer at certain clicks on their phone. Early discovery of computers have resulted in this change and has benifited us a lot.
Manual labour is now thing of past as automation and machines have taken their place. Earlier industries required a large amount of labour force to manufacture products, like textile industries were filled with skilled labour requiring intense traininig to understand and learn to make a product but now machines have taken over them and thus eradicated the requirement of skilled labour.
A lot of old skills like traditional farming , textile making , clock making is now obselete. But technology has contributed making these tasks easy fast and reliable. So learning these new abilities will help us understand the recent technology and get more out of it. Although we ahve forgotten some old skills and abilities, we have gained some new skills which helps better understand understand the technology and get most out of it.
- the benefits of technology come at a price increasing dependence will result in an overall weakening of human abilities 50
- the benefits of technology come at a price increasing dependence will result in an overall weakening of human abilities 50
- When Ida McAllister ran for mayor of Lake City four years ago she failed to win even 30 percent of the vote But since then McAllister has made public her commitment to environmental causes She would be wise therefore to announce her intention to close all 66
- technology is weakening human abilities 66
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and Technology have always advanced us ,which has made some skills ,beliefs and ...
^^
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... advanced us ,which has made some skills ,beliefs and concepts obselete and it is ...
^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...und of alarm, use microwaves for cooking , perform daily works on laptops,computer...
^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computers
...cooking , perform daily works on laptops,computers. This has made of life easy than the ea...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of old skills like traditional farming , textile making , clock making is now ob...
^^
Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ike traditional farming , textile making , clock making is now obselete. But techn...
^^
Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: understand
...ined some new skills which helps better understand understand the technology and get most out of it. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84137633544 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6463539504 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1033117591 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409278960979 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481045386273 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604865916726 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535109398658 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 47, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e and Technology have always advanced us ,which has made some skills ,beliefs and ...
^^
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... advanced us ,which has made some skills ,beliefs and concepts obselete and it is ...
^^
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...und of alarm, use microwaves for cooking , perform daily works on laptops,computer...
^^
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , computers
...cooking , perform daily works on laptops,computers. This has made of life easy than the ea...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t of old skills like traditional farming , textile making , clock making is now ob...
^^
Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ike traditional farming , textile making , clock making is now obselete. But techn...
^^
Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: understand
...ined some new skills which helps better understand understand the technology and get most out of it. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 268.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20895522388 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84137633544 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6463539504 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 5.21951772744 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1033117591 0.243740707755 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409278960979 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481045386273 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604865916726 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535109398658 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 14.1392134831 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.