The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Sometimes brilliant ideas are required in our workplaces and every day life. While some stuggle to come up with ingenious ideas, there are people who surprisingly presents some new idea which were emulated from commonplace things. The prompt suggests the best ideas arise form a passionate interest in commonplace things and I mostly agree to this statement for following reasons.
One of the most famous Korean inventor or scientist, "Jang-Yeong-Sil" is known for his numerous inventions in the 13th century. His inventions can be viewed as nothing special to modern people, but it is hard to refute that he invented new and orignal inventions considering his contemporary era. He invented the first "sun-clock" which simply let people find out time by using a stone needle's shade and its dispostion. Remarkably, however, he developed this invention when he was a kid. He was observing shades of objects in a garden. By thoroughly inspecting commonplace objects with passionate curiosity and interest, he concoted such a simple invention which his ancestors couldn't establish. Indeed, perhaps more passion and interest in mundane things we encounter on our lives can lead to a brilliant invention.
There are similiar anecdotes in the western world as well. For example, Isaac Newton also in his earlier ages, came up with the notion of gravity while sitting under an apple tree, and by catching the apple falling from above. To some general people, this kind of common things is not interesting and can be easily ignored. On the other hand, for those who have many interests on things happening or residing nearby us, tend to focus on some phenomenon or objects and eventually bring up a new ingenious idea.
For those who oppose the statement can argue that passionate interest can hinder coming with a breakthrough soloution or idea and rather, distancing from things and problems can help thinking an idea. Also, commonplace things can not be such helpful on solving the most inscrutable, difficult obstacles. Nevertheless, by the example mentioned above, I think commonplace things can manifest a solution or method that we easily overlooked. From the ingenous views of kids, they can come up with a original idea which adults could have not thought of. Also, without passionate interest in a field or subject, its chances are lower to come up with a brilliant solution.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-18 | ekarumeblessing@icloud.com | 66 | view |
| 2024-11-10 | hhj | 66 | view |
| 2024-11-09 | KLH | 66 | view |
| 2024-10-31 | ekarumeblessing@icloud.com | 79 | view |
| 2024-10-29 | batterylow_123 | 58 | view |
- These days young people are less reliant on their parents advice to make important life decisions 90
- In any field of inquiry the beginner is more likely than the expert to make important contributions Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In 50
- The best way to teach whether as an educator employer or parents to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones 62
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society one must study its major cities Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take In develo 83
- Students should evaluate the performance of their teachers 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 698, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... a simple invention which his ancestors couldnt establish. Indeed, perhaps more passion...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 495, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...us views of kids, they can come up with a original idea which adults could have n...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2012.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18556701031 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05059280865 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564432989691 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0838761473 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.894736842 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.21951772744 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203793675094 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652061599931 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593096187873 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138507021116 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597065834067 0.0667264976115 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.