The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As the old saying goes," Adversity is the mother of all inventions", man always manages to find solutions to his problems. Be it the discovery of fire , by the accidental rubbing of two flint stones or the invention of the wheels, which eased the job of carrying heavy loads across distances, man has always drawn inspiration from commonplace things.
There is no natural inspiration for invention. It can be found out that a lot of ideas were actually inspired by the nature. For example, it is commonly said that the idea for the pitchfork came from forked sticks in the wild. Similarly, it was gliding birds that provided the muse for invention of the airplane. However, such inspirations have to be fuelled by passionate interest to turn the ideas into reality. It would have not been possible for anybody to actually grasp and formulate the laws of gravity by the mere hitting of an apple if not for the passion towards physics Sir Issac Newton possessed. This obsession with physics actually led and the accidental drop of the apple actually helped him find the great Newton's Law of forces.
The story of Mark Zuckerburg in creating Facebook is also an illustration of how an idea driven by passion interest gave rise to the modern social media we know today. His fascination towards computers started from a young age of twelve, when he created a messaging program called "ZuckNet" out of basic programming software to help with the communication at his father's dental office. His fixation towards computers never died out and in college he along with a group of friends, captivated by Mark's earlier projects, set out to create a dating site for Harvard's elite. They eventually dropped out of college and ended up co-founding "Facebook" in 2004. Today, Facebook has over a billion users and Mark Zuckerburg is one of the richest men in the world.
Therefore, I strongly agree that passionate interest in commonplace things can lead to better ideas. So it is fruitful to consider even smallest phenomenon happening near us and as the saying goes, "To acquire knowledge one must study, to acquire wisdom, one must observe".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04709141274 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98055417392 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 215.323595506 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609418282548 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.904972811 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5625 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.21951772744 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110768500882 0.243740707755 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038221588555 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330899838487 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061759997361 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209550005373 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.