The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in goverment, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
I agree with the statement given that the society to prepare its young people for leadership in any fields by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition. Here I agree because the young people which takes the authority will be having great strength and new ideas as compared to the old people. And the young people will have the more capacity to do work in any field than the old people.
The primary reason why I agree is that the young people will have the great strength and different views which benefits the society. So, if the young person is compared with the same age person then there will be conflict and they will thing to have more capabilities then other and there will be great competition between them so they will become selfish and will their benefits only so they should be instilled with great ideas so they have sense of cooperation. And they work together as a team for better uplifting the society.
Secondly, If they are prepared for taking leadership in any of the field than they should not be compared with other they should be given ideas so they work as a team. For example, the founder of Microsoft Bill Gates in his young age generated the operating system with the help of his team if he was in competition with his team members they he can never develop the OS.
Finally, in any field like government sector also if the young people is insisted to take the leadership they he have great capacity and strength for uplifting the society with cooperating with his team members. And The Ex - President of India stated that, "Young people are the bright future of any country".
Thus for benefits and improvement in any field I agree with the above statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_NNS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'more capabilities than'?
Suggestion: more capabilities than
...be conflict and they will thing to have more capabilities then other and there will be great competiti...
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Line 2, column 269, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ey will thing to have more capabilities then other and there will be great competiti...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...insisted to take the leadership they he have great capacity and strength for uplifti...
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Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e bright future of any country'. Thus for benefits and improvement in any fie...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233128834356 0.240241500013 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.144171779141 0.157235817809 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0828220858896 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0398773006135 0.0497285424764 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.079754601227 0.0444667217837 179% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.150306748466 0.12292977631 122% => OK
Participles: 0.0429447852761 0.0406280797675 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46286258 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0153374233129 0.030933414821 50% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.10736196319 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0368098159509 0.0249443105267 148% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00920245398773 0.0148568991511 62% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1720.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 304.0 452.878318584 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65789473684 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.266447368421 0.366273622748 73% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194078947368 0.280924506359 69% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154605263158 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0888157894737 0.132149295362 67% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46286258 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 219.290929204 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427631578947 0.48968727796 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 41.2677141925 55.4138127331 74% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 27.6363636364 23.380412469 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5898556921 59.4972553346 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.363636364 141.124799967 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6363636364 23.380412469 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.909090909091 0.674092028746 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 47.0442583732 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.61627906977 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353200369997 0.391690518653 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.221322676105 0.123202303941 180% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103998356027 0.077325440228 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.725585245117 0.547984918172 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147579618895 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195556954224 0.161403998019 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143479415746 0.0892212321368 161% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.381563393839 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0705718578005 0.0692045440612 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23814665181 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104783327817 0.0653680567796 160% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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