"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
This given topic is highly contentious because different people may have different opinions regarding the concept of the sense of cooperation and as well competing for the welfare of the society.
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In the contemporary world or the global world of the 21st century, the sense of cooperation doesn't play a pivotal role in the development of society as well as individuals. As the sense of cooperation stimulates in an individual the various types of the development works may be thwarted. It is said that "If there is a will there is a way". If there is no competition or the urge for competition among the individuals there would not be a success in any field. As far as the competition is concerned it can be found that two of the living legends and most decorated players of the soccer of the modern era named Cristiano Ronaldo and Lionel Messi because of the sense of the competition among these modern legends they push each other and urge each other to be better had it not have been competition among these legends the player would not have reached the epitome of the success. The sense of the competition among these elite players turned out to be "the icing on the cake" for the development of their careers. Not only among the players the sense of the competition helped to make each other better in the field of the industry also. The two world-class companies such as Nike as well as Adidas are achieving this epitome of success because of the competition.
In the same way, the sense of cooperation also turned out to be the best way to prepare a prodigy. Through the sense of cooperation, the feeling of magnanimity is instilled in the young ones may be turned out to be beneficial in the further days. Regarding the sense of cooperation if you retrospect the past "The light of Asia" Gautam Buddha is known for his germane, kinship, and sense of cooperation. Had it not been for the sense of cooperation and urge to help others he wouldn't have been known today for his deeds. Through the sense of the cooperation among the various politician, various types of the development work can be carried out in an effective and as well as smooth way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mpeting for the welfare of the society. . In the contemporary world or the globa...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... 21st century, the sense of cooperation doesnt play a pivotal role in the development ...
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Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ment of society as well as individuals. As the sense of cooperation stimulates in ...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...urge each other to be better had it not have been competition among these legends th...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...her better in the field of the industry also. The two world-class companies such as ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... cooperation and urge to help others he wouldnt have been known today for his deeds. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, regarding, so, still, well, such as, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 383.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72845953003 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76705054872 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422976501305 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7442738224 60.3974514979 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.357142857 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3571428571 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305599084197 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113984654402 0.0831039109588 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617666356851 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200582036996 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561589754483 0.0667264976115 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.