The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Beyond Doubt, the statement : " The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in givernment, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition " is highly contentious in nature. Some people may agree whole heartedly to this whereas some cannot stand it at all. In my perspective, I am consonant with the statement at greater extent and consider cooperation as one of the building block of an individual or group determined to succeed.
Some people may argue that in this 21st century every field in the world are imbibed with the population and thus in order to excel or lead in a particular field one has to always dwell in competition mode. For instance, a player of single sports like Badminton, Archery, Race, Boxing etc should always have a sense of competition in them in order to lead their country as they always have to defeat their opponents in the game. There is no place of cooperation among them they cannot show leniency for the opponent of the game. Similarly, the industries in order to excel has to be competitve in every aspect like quality, price etc which can only be achieved by having a sense of competitiveness among the workers.
However, competition may be the somehow important as a leadership quality, but the cooperation cannot be left at all behind in any field. The cooperation among the people in any field is the base for the success. For example, the same sports category disscussed earlier the team sports like cricket, football etc cannot be led by a people only having feeling of competition, cooperation among the players is must to execute any plan which would lead to victory. Similarly, inside the industries there is a need of cooperation among different departments in order to win their own field. For instance, a movie which is produced would be a complete mess if the cameraman, lights and sound departments are not in unison with each other, thus there comes the responsibility of a director to make a good combination of them otherwise be ready for a flop.
Moreover, in course of preparing for the better, the young should always have a sense of conceding and cooperation thus ro make them great as we a social animal is based on the fact that we cooperate for our existence. For instance, in the sector of government, a leader with the sense of competitiveness would most probably lead to destruction of world. Adolf Hitler, the tyrant of Germany, led to the killing of a large group of people and World war just due to his will to become a powerful country in that region. But, in the same case a leader with a sense of cooperation would concede to the matter of world peace and combined exixtence of all ending all communal harmony and disturbing factors.
Thus copoeration plays a greater role in a leaders life for his greatness and a greater good in the world rather a small pinch of competition is also required.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ition, cooperation among the players is must to execute any plan which would lead to vi...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...mmunal harmony and disturbing factors. Thus copoeration plays a greater role in a l...
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Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
...s copoeration plays a greater role in a leaders life for his greatness and a greater go...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, still, thus, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 89.0 58.6224719101 152% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 12.9106741573 217% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2435.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 513.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74658869396 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80150575505 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465886939571 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 778.5 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6183116844 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.235294118 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1764705882 23.4991977007 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322302215515 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105111143344 0.0831039109588 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800503821849 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173216924177 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075325617601 0.0667264976115 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 14.1392134831 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.