Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Beyond doubt , the statement given as the prompt is highly contentious in nature. Some may agree that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study whereas others cannot stand it at all and believe that college students should base their choices of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. Personally , I agree at a greater extent that college entrants should choose their field of study on the basis of their talents and interests for the following reasons.
Some may argue that college students should select the field of study on the basis of the availability of jobs in that field as there would be more chances to be settled and contribute to the country. For instance, in case of students of North Korea, the best and in demand field of job is in defense sector. The dictator has got all of his consciousness leading to the development of warfare technologies and defense mechanisms in case of attack. So, anyone there studying arts or liberal science would be futile to government and thus would stuck there career in quagmire.So it is required of them to choose their field as per the availability of that field's job.
However, I believe that students should study the field which interests them because in this case the inner force motivates them to excel better in that field. For instance: APJ Abdul kalam, the missile man of India, had a vivid interest in the field of rocket science and thus he pursued the same and whole of the world can see what he has achieved in his respective field. Inspite of many difficulties and failures, he conducted many experiments and projects for the betterment of the future of Indian Space Research Organization (ISRO ) and lead it to one of the best in South asian sub-continent.
Moreover, the job market is ever-changing market where a hot job of one decade may be the least important in other. For instance, in 1970s and 1980s the nuclear field was burgeoning at a great pace and graduates were placed with high salary but after some mishaps and disasters in nuclear energy field its popularity started to wane an thus people shifted to more cleaner and renewable energy sources. Similarly, the high demand computer jobs in the present scenario may be taken over by Artificial Intelligence i the near future and thus the graduates would have scarce job opportunity. So as the job market is ever changing so the students cannot guarantee their career as per the present market as it is so volatile.
Thus, In conclusion if they had chosen their own interest of field they would always find their way to excel in that field and also find personal satisfaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
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...arted to wane an thus people shifted to more cleaner and renewable energy sources. Similarly...
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...nd thus the graduates would have scarce job opportunity. So as the job market is ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80387931034 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61499948218 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476293103448 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 23.0359550562 130% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0113398876 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.6 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.9333333333 23.4991977007 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.21951772744 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.544964126929 0.243740707755 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1811266341 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207217939839 0.0758088955206 273% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312731598554 0.150359130593 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.208814205316 0.0667264976115 313% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 11.2143820225 125% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.