The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A leader is someone who has many qualities like empathy, critical thinking, a sense of responsiblity, someone who knows how to cooperate and make decisions for the best of the people they are leading. A sense of competition is therefore a part of making a good leader. For when another person evinces qualities better than ourselves our sense of competition makes us want to be better, which is an important requirement for growth as a leader and an individual. Cooperation is one of those many traits that helps a good leader succeed.
Let us look at Steve Jobs and the unprecedented example he set for us with Apple. He demonstrated excellent cooperation within Apple, with his employees, suppliers and partners. It is this sense of cooperation that built trust, made everyone feel like an important cog within the growing business and made them want to do better. When building the first macintosh he sure didn't agree with everything said by everyone he was working with but his leadership qualities helped him make one cohesive product possible. It is also of utmost importance to realise that Steve Jobs wouldn't have been so driven had there not been competition in the market by the name of IBM. The competition fueled his ambition and led him to make all the right decisions while building this successful business.
Leadership is a skill that helps us grow in every aspect of our lives and therefore schools in various ways try to inculcate it when we're young. The most prominent example is choosing captains for houses and then having intra-school competions within those houses. Being a captain myself I can vouch that this ameliorated my skills ten folds and taught me lessons not only on cooperation but also on importance of competition. For even when all of us were best of friends and always ready to help and make space for each other, watching each other work so hard made us want to do better and better to make our house win. A sense of competition in a leader benefits not only the leader but drives everyone that they are leading. What would be a better example of a successful leader than someone who awakens their people's drive?
All that said in some sectors competition takes a backhand. For example if government officals in office cooperate with each other it might be more beneficial for the common man as compared to when they're competing. When important decisons like restructuting of roads and building of bridges are concered if offcials of two groups cooperated and came to a decision it would make the work hassle free at least in one department. Whereas if they keep competing trying to prove themselves better the choices such as which roads and bridges to choose might just be harder to make.
I would therefore say that preparing the young for leadership by instilling cooperation is just one of the many aspects of preparation. A sense of competion is equally important. A leader that fails to demonstrate any one of the skills might just be left behind in today's world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, while, at least, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.3162921348 177% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2504.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83397683398 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71699749749 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 215.323595506 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494208494208 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3021898485 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.869565217 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5217391304 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4347826087 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194804803575 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569368702742 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458872366293 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118857358354 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280585359361 0.0667264976115 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.