The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
As it is popularly stated "Leaders run the world", we all are very much aware
about the importance of good and dutyful leaders. and alongside we also appreciate
and laud their character and qualities. The claim suggests for the society to prepare
their youth well for leadership in various domains of life it must instill cooperation
rather than competition. How does cooperation turn out to be a better more
sensibile thing to have in your qualities when compared to competition? Leadership
as much as it needs the person to be competitive it needs them to have a sense of
togetherness and cooperation and this can be better elaborated via a couple of
examples.
When it comes to bodies like the government, industries and fields like
institutions and organizations which are the very basic functioning blocks of out
current world, we need a leader that is best suited and has a goal of betterment but
not the cost of its competitors. Considering whether it be ministers of states,
assemblies and even politicians who hold any form of power, the biggest being the
Prime Ministers and Presidents of the countries of the world. Their sole goal must
be peace and welfare of the world while being concerned for their own people. A
competitive leader can be blindsided to the wrong-doings at time and the
government functions best when the leader is more cooperative and considerate of
each and everyone. A sence of competition is not to be seen as something awful or
in negative light because it is a much needed quality of a leader, but the strong
unwavered need for being overly competitive that it even leads to the downfall of
your own state can be devastating. We happen to live in a world where sometimes
the air and atmosphere around begins to get very tense with international conflicts
and at such times all we ask for is cooperation.
Secondly, the fact we see our young leaders grow and starting becoming a
part of the real world is when they are in schools, colleges, etc. And we are very
aware how education institutions can be the epitome of instilling competitiveness
into its students. Incase of such institutions and body we see plenty of leadership
opportunities whether it be the president or a lead of a project and more things like
leaders and flag barers of the institution clubs like cultural and sport clubs. An
overly competitive leader need not necessarily be the one for the role as they must
prioritise their people without neglecting any. A leader should be for the people and
must learn to lead and carry the group with maximized satisfaction of its people.
The question arises should such leader leave behind hsi competitive spirit? Clearly
not, as he or she must be motivated for the betterment of the group. just not
forgetting the fact that a leaders quality for coorperation will only lead to a lot of
good aswell. To state a few things a college or school level leader when cooperative
will be addressing people fairly, being accountable to all, having better relations
with the people and leaders around him and will have a smooth fucntioning of the
group or club he or she are leading.
All in all we somewhat agree with the fact that the society must instill
qualities of cooperation over competiton not neglecting the sense of competition
entirely. Cooperative sense in a leader will bring better working and the people will
be more pleased whether it be the government of a nation or it be just a small club
at and education institution. The society molds its leaders and we realize a
cooperative leader always leaves behind rays or hope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 40.0 14.8657303371 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3062.0 2235.4752809 137% => OK
No of words: 618.0 442.535393258 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95469255663 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98594081286 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90995383061 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 215.323595506 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448220064725 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 939.6 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1004515142 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.130434783 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8695652174 23.4991977007 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.39130434783 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 45.0 4.97078651685 905% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235599188001 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077114241742 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588449219805 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0560960262377 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511643307375 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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