The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
A leader is someone who does not command his teammates rather listens to their demands and will do his best to meet them. He creates a amicable environment for the members of the team to work in. The youth or the younger generation of the people are the emerging leaders of any nation and a question as to which approach to follow while developing the leadership skills is prevailing, a sense of competition or a satisfaction of cooperation. I believe that the upcoming genration must be taught teamwork, must be taught kindness and generosity rather than self gain and self delevopment. I believe in a holistic development rather than hostile growth.
Firstly, a competition is something that develops hostility among the people. A competition leads to a single winner and a many losers. For example, if there is a single price to win among a class of 20 students, it only means that out of the 20 students, there is only one winner and 19 losers. Competition in my opinion is a misnomer of leadership. If the one leader who won the award tries to dominate the other, or misue the throne, then the whole class is in ashes. Similarly, within a government or within an indusrty, if there is competition among themselves, then the governemnt or the members of the industry are meant to fail due to the vulnerability and lack of coordination.
Further, cooperation fosters teamwork. Teamwork is the strongest known tool for representing the leadership. If there is coordiation and cooperation among the members of the team and a sense of togetherness, then the leader is said to suceed.For instance, consider a team of 11 players of a Cricket match. If the 11 players wish to play in the way they like, then the team is meant to lose, however the Indian team in 2011 has veritably displyed the meaning of teamwork where the captain of the team heard the demands of the team and directed each one to work in a cooporative way. This had lead to the ultimate success where team India has won the title of world champions.
However, in few situations, there might be circumstances where excessive cooperation may lead to loosing motivation and lack of interest to contribute. In such situation a competition with small rewards might be very helpful. For instane, in a NGO where the volunteers have lost interest to contribute to the elderly health, an initiative to award the best volunteer with food coupons or recognising them in public may induce a sense of motivation and the volunteers might work for the betterment of the society. Similarly in certain occasions, in a goverment or indusrtial sectors a healthy competition may bolster the willingness of the people to work better and contribute more.
Thus it is evident that a person who wants to become a leader through competition is only looking for self gain, where as someone who wants to grow along with their peers is a true leader needing to be acclaimed. I belive that this young generation, needs to be made aware of the imprtane of cooperation and growth as a team. They must be kept away from a toxic competitive growth to become a respectable leaders.
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...work for the betterment of the society. Similarly in certain occasions, in a goverment or...
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...le to work better and contribute more. Thus it is evident that a person who wants t...
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...petitive growth to become a respectable leaders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 539.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79220779221 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91228384845 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471243042672 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 801.9 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3331402319 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.304347826 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4347826087 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47826086957 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168454235883 0.243740707755 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466253564139 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331265551319 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085920952041 0.150359130593 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127487710705 0.0667264976115 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.