Here, author wants to say that,the best way for a society to prepare its young generation for leadership program.It is given that leadership in government,industry, ore any othe field where they can become leader.Also it is said that, istilling them a sense of cooperation with others but not competition.
Firstly, being a leader is the great achievement in any field like government,industry etc. and the development of a leader is starts from the school level ltself.The school should start the some leadership program for the students also should start the lecturer of the greatest leaders having around them. So that the inspiration for becoming the leader starts form that age only.
For the becoming the leader in the government i.e. politician one must have the sence of cooperaration with the society.The politician now-a-days are only looking for the competition with the other political parties,but the society should prepare the young generation for becoming the leader who understand the demand of the people and make use of his powers for fulfilling the peoples demand and develop the society.
The todays young people has good imagination power, also has the various technologies around them .Using them it shold be observed that what improvements can be done, so that the technology become very much useful for people to use them.
leadership qualities will play major role in the making the society even better,because people today only want a job which fulfill their needs without any mind ,they are doing job like machines and end up giving their job.leaders have never give up on anything they make hundred efforts for getting the thing which they want in life ,so the society can make use of it.
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...etting the thing which they want in life ,so the society can make use of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10283687943 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89866450676 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567375886525 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.87976823 60.3974514979 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 205.571428571 118.986275619 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.2857142857 23.4991977007 171% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.21951772744 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272971053437 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124393951466 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0865624290176 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156689124678 0.150359130593 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842450581948 0.0667264976115 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.19 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.7820224719 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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