The Best way for society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry brother fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
People cooperationg with each other brings good for the society. No society is fully functional without its cooperating citizens. Therefore, I agree with the statement that the best way for society to prepare for leadersihp in government, industry or in other fields is by instilling them a sense of coopertion.
In a work environment when there is often competition between people to reach to the top of the ladder, but one can benefit from the cooperative environment. Cooperative environment not only allows the company to grow, but it also helps reduce the mental stress of the work. In a competitive environment there maybe more output, but the end result cannot be worth the quality. Take smartphone market for example - Samsung and Apple has long rivalry. They both are now producing two flagship phones each year with minimum amount of changes from the previous version and hence people are now looking at other cheaper smartphone alternative declining Apple's and Samsung's share in the market. Cooperative ideas are productive as well as with higher quality. Europe is one of the strongest economy. This is all because of European union(EU) a cooperation between nations of Europe.
Cooperation is not very welcomed in society if it is used for wrong cause. An office can cooperate on bribery which is wrong.
Although competition urges an individual to take out best of himself, but it also tires the person to an extant that he resent his work. Competition can bring worse out of people. For example competition between neighbouring countries. Due to competition there is always war or the countries cannot mutually benefit from each other resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 271.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15129151292 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83743512037 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612546125461 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9050857374 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1176470588 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9411764706 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210897230858 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646215817853 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118984299857 0.0758088955206 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152919559399 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167711839993 0.0667264976115 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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