The statement declared that, for possessing an augment community in disparate dimensions such as politics, industry and other fields, it is crucially important to provoke the sense of synergy and cooperation in children rather than competition. Nowadays, it has been stated that human cooperation with each other is vital for pursuing genuine goals world-widely. Furthermore, noticing that aspect, societies in our era found significant effects of working together instead of competing each other.
In the light of the statement, raising youngsters in a way to persuade them to evolve gregariously despite personally would benefit society numerous positive circumstances. For instance, schools and comprehensively education legislation are inclined to omit numeral scores and substantiate quality facts in the process of educating. Moreover, it means with eliminating scores, children would have been assessed by their efficiency in quality extrapolations such as perfect, good, average and etc. All in all, this procedure evolves the sense of cooperation in them instead of competition.
Similarly, we are living in democratic world, at least we assert that, and that imply this meaning that disputes or generally conflicts does not have any place in our ideal perspective world. Apparently, for attaining such an environment, we should obliterate the sense of competition in our children to hyphen their future with peace. For example, Iran's deal was a perfect example for respect and cooperation with a world despite conflicting with them in policy dimension of this issue.
Admittedly, with regarding to the fact that, competition sometimes had aroused our augments in the past, However, it is not improving all aspects in holistic view and sometime it would have detrimental effects in future of our young generation. As an exemplification, a child maybe would benefit from competition in a race event, nonetheless, he/she should not involve it all dimensions in life because, he/she will feel the lack of others experience and bolster he/her abilities and susceptibilities less than who cooperate each other.
In sum, provoking the sense of cooperation not only prosper people in personal aspect, but, the whole community would use beneficial efficacious traits of it. Hence, for possessing a developed society the need of cooperation is indispensable in all fields.
- The following appeared in a memo from the director of student housing at Buckingham College."To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current 34
- If rituals did not exist we have to invent them. We need ceremonies and rituals to help us define ourselves social and culturally. 83
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 41
- It takes a village to raise a child The education of your children is the task of the community as a whole not merely the province of teachers and local school administrators 75
- Statistics gathered over the past three decades show that the death rate is higher among those who do not have jobs than among those with regular employment. Unemployment, just like heart disease and cancer, is a significant health issue. While many healt 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 45, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...statement declared that, for possessing an augment community in disparate dimensions such ...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...olations such as perfect, good, average and etc. All in all, this procedure evolves the ...
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Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...bilities and susceptibilities less than who cooperate each other. In sum, provok...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, nonetheless, regarding, similarly, so, at least, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59392265193 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15343924222 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585635359116 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 636.3 704.065955056 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4670797751 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.642857143 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.21951772744 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194915232121 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071626265507 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422553055309 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111995167353 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418158263441 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 14.1392134831 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.