the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other fields is by instilling in them the sense of cooperation, not competition
The author's claim that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other fields is by insilling in them the sense of cooperation, not competition is a contentious one. While each sides, progressing with cooperation or competition have their strengths and weakness along with many examples in day to day life which i shall discuss the same in following paragraphs.
A healthy competition is usually considered as a strong pillar for advancements. Competition helps in unfolding the strong desire to achieve before others and success entails. Consider one of the great rivelary of technology age, Apple vs Microsoft or Steve Jobs vs Bill Gates which turned the modern era with computer technology. Desktops, laptops, PDAs, handsets, thin & sleek mobile phones, etc. all these and that too in a very less time of 7-12 years changed the whole way we use to communicate with each others and brought the world closer. This was possible only because of the strong desire to be better than the other, a healthy competition one may call.
Furthermore, we can take example of aeroplane industry. Advancement of that was again the result of neck to neck competition between Wright brothers and Curtiss. A rivelary so strong that it changed the way wars were fought. Starting from manual wooden air plane, Wright brothers were able to make new models from time to time only because of the strong challange given by Curtiss who introduced the first engine driven air plane. Likewise, there are many examples in almost all the industries where technological advancements took place at a very high pace because of competition or one can say, the desire to be the first one.
So can we conclude that, competition is all we need to teach the young ones to succeed. The answer is "No". As one has righly said, "I you want to go fast, go alone, but if you want to go far, go together". One cannot deny the power of cooperation. Which acts as a very strong pillar for sustenance. A very good example we can take from the rivelary of Wright brothers and Curtiss, is that, at the end their organisation collaborated for sustanence of all the developments they did competiting with each other.
Similarly, we can take example of the music industry, where people colaborate on numerous occasions, corporate functions, tours, national events, etc to learn from other artists. As we all know the fact that one cannot know everything, cooperation is one of the best way to bridge that gap, no matter if its music industry, leadership in govenment, or other fields. With cooperation you can experience the best of others and take life long learning.
With all the examples for both sides presented above, I would like to conclude that competition is good for succeeding and advance in a very positive and fast way but one should not avoid cooperation as its the strongest force that helps in sustaining.
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- the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or any other fields is by instilling in them the sense of cooperation, not competition 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, likewise, may, similarly, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2468.0 2235.4752809 110% => OK
No of words: 499.0 442.535393258 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94589178357 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83569815037 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517034068136 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4347681641 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.304347826 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6956521739 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28288176222 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833297374765 0.0831039109588 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156389220476 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169343753533 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148037463507 0.0667264976115 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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