The contemporary world encompasses many of the sophisticated sections in the society. To run those sections, there must be the sophisticated minds which must have certain characteristics. In today's world even though there is an alacrity in the developments to obtain more gains and profits in order to reach the apogee with huge number of competitors in their respective field, the paucity of sense of cooperation may collapse the whole organization. Hence considering the future prospect, it is important to raise the young people by instilling the sense of cooperation more than that of the competition to lead particular sections of the society like government or an industry.
Sense of Cooperation is major factor needed in order to be the benefactor of the society. The lack of that factor in Indian Kings in around 1600’s made the British’s colonize the Great India for more than 400 years. The than Indian kings, in the race to increase their affluence, fell for the hoax promises made by English and threatened their neighboring Indian kingdoms and when getting ignored attacked with the help of Britishers and conquered them but at the end getting back stabbed by Britishers themselves. It can be easily said that if sense of cooperation was existed in than rulers of India; it might not have been got colonialized by Britishers so easily. Analytically speaking with respect to this sense, in the contemporary world if we really want our next generation to lead the society in a viable manner sense of cooperation is the most necessary factor to be inculcated in them.
India which is the biggest democracy in the world, can be one of the greatest examples for the given statement. Despite of thousands of Caste, creed, Languages, and a billion plus population count, India stands as one of the leading nations in the world in many fields. It is because the government, leaders as well as the denizens do have the sense of co operations in them yet there are few bad factors.
In a nutshell, sense of co operations as mentioned taking the examples of India and its history, It is mainly needed in todays youth in order if they want to lead the society in todays world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, really, so, still, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92722371968 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90666535936 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514824797844 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0968448521 60.3974514979 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.615384615 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5384615385 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.21951772744 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14738695851 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509356038415 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037886114757 0.0758088955206 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0828382084608 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178035500267 0.0667264976115 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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