The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Young people of today's society, often vie against people to achieve something. The world is full of limited opportunities which are strived by myriad of people, competition is innate to us because of this low supply to demand ratio. We are inveterately prone to compete with someone and vanquish over others in order to achieve what we want.
This competition while inveterate to us, must be circumscribed only to a certain level, there are certain people who tend to vie for even the most petty things, too much competition can be deemed pernicious to themselves or the fields they contribute to. People with competitive mentality cannot even enjoy the pedantic aspects of daily life as they perceive a competition even in the most trivial mundane things, if such indiviuals are working in an organization with a team then his or her attitude may stymie the team's work, thereby causing turbulence in the organization. In such cases, a sense of cooperation can ameliorate things in the organization.
People should have a conscience along with competitive spirit. Sometimes, the competition in people may grow to such an extent that it can be deleterious to the society. It can lead to malevolent actions on their part. Such people become more desperate than competitive. Hence, people should have an upper bound for their sense of competition.
Government, industry or any other fields requires its people to work in a team. In the end, all that matters is the team's growth and the organization's benefit from this growth. Hence, if young people are trained to be more competitive than cooperative then the professional environment will be inimical to them and to the people that work around them, which implies that young people should be instilled with a sense of cooperation along with some sense of competition as in this world, if we dont compete for opportunities, someone else will and he or she will sieze it.
Hence, in my opinion, young people should be instilled with cooperation with commensurate sense in competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'whiles'.
Suggestion: whiles
...chieve what we want. This competition while inveterate to us, must be circumscribed...
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Line 2, column 482, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hi'?
Suggestion: hi
...ing in an organization with a team then his or her attitude may stymie the teams wo...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teams'' or 'team's'?
Suggestion: teams'; team's
...am. In the end, all that matters is the teams growth and the organizations benefit fr...
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Line 4, column 493, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... of competition as in this world, if we dont compete for opportunities, someone else...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, still, then, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 337.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04451038576 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92280799502 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525222551929 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 100.922324367 60.3974514979 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287302818022 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950719366918 0.0831039109588 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767926300799 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166434354523 0.150359130593 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764892134397 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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