The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The word cooperation used here suggests the meanings of teamwork, support and congruent state of mind. I have seen many of the tasks or activities which requires the individuals to work as a team rather than compete amongst themselves which obviously would result in poor overall performance. So I strongly agree with the claim that young people should learn how to work in cooperation with the others nonetheless of which field they are going to work in, let it be a technological company or maybe as a political leader or even in any sports. However, I also believe that competition also plays an important part of the role in a young person’s life.
To illustrate my thoughts, I would provide an example that is regarding to the Indian historical relationship with the British. The British landed on the Indian soil around 1610 with the purpose of business trades. During that time, India had several kingdoms with their respective rulers. As there were different rulers spread throughout the land, each ruler had his own pride and mindset which contravenes with the others. Now due to this lack of harmony within the nation, British started to intervene in the political matters and gradually they started capturing different kingdoms one by one and then the rest is history. I think this is the best example which illustrates the lack of cooperation amongst the rulers of different kingdoms and its consequences. No doubt that individually they were strong and potent as a good leader but was it enough to overcome the British invasion?
Another example that shows how the cooperation between a private firm and government body has achieved one of the greatest achievements in human history. Yes, they are SpaceX and NASA. The corroboration of both the firms has enabled the SpaceX to launch a crew of astronauts to the International Space Station in May 30, 2020. If only NASA did not collaborate with the SpaceX company and both of them worked as separate individual bodies, it would be difficult to complete such great task and thus the current results might have been seen in the less distant future. Because of this harmony between two different entities, it has also given a glimpse of hope for the humanity to successfully achieve the human colonization on Mars.
I would also like to share an example of how competition is also an important factor in a young person’s life. According to me, competition can be classified into two categories: good rivalry and bad rivalry. It is prominent that the competition should be kept as a good rivalry only because the term competition and thrive to be better are innate characteristics of a human psychology. If there is no competition, your want to be better will be extinguished and you will be in a dead state. And I don’t think that there is any “perfect” human being existing till date and every individual is trying to make himself/herself better than the yesterday. If a person takes the competition as a bad rivalry, he/she will eventually lose the sense of himself/herself and may also sidetrack from his/her original motives and goals.
So in short, I strongly believe that cooperation or collaboration or teamwork are important aspects for a person in spite of whatever field he/she is working in. Because that will help them accomplish their tasks and achieve their goals more effectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: IN_JANUARY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'on May'? This seems to be a day date.
Suggestion: on May
...auts to the International Space Station in May 30, 2020. If only NASA did not collabor...
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Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...ortant factor in a young person’s life. According to me, competition can be classified into two...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nonetheless, regarding, so, then, thus, i think, in short, no doubt, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2807.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 565.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96814159292 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87542086881 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89662983586 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 215.323595506 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50796460177 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 875.7 704.065955056 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2791513011 60.3974514979 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.958333333 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5416666667 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54166666667 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142119111644 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344531125489 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03679739091 0.0758088955206 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758954908538 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383033282889 0.0667264976115 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 100.480337079 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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