The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The mind of a child is malleable as that is when they can be thought various values of life that will or will not stick with them for the entirety of their lives. For this reason, I strongly disagree with the prompt that says that young students should be thought a sense of cooperation instead of a sense of competition and there three reasons behind my resolution against the prompt that will be delineated in subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, competiton breeds innovation. When young people are imbibed with the culture of competition, that sense of competition tends to bring out the innovative side in them. For instance, various phone brand companies such as Huawei and Samsung are run by people with the spirit of competition. This spirit of competition makes them think of various ways they can outdo their previous designs and the competiting company which in turn is a benefit to us the consumers. If there was just one phone brand with lots of people cooperating together to bring new products, we will not have been able to do all the things the smart phone can do today because of the complacency that will come along with it. Therefore, as a result of competiton, people in various brands are thinking of new, innovative ways to outdo their competitors and consequently, that is a good thing for us at the bottom of the production chain as we get to enjoy the benefits of the competition.
Secondly, competition yields hardwork. When people are in a competition for a prize, there is tendency for the such people to put even more work than they would have had they been just put side by side to work together to achieve a common goal. For instance, in a project where students are asked to do a research on a topic, and the person with the most detailed and analytical research gets to win a prize while the person with the most perfunctory work gets a penalty, this sort of competition will yield hardwork as every sane person wants to be rewarded and not penalized. If such students were just put in groups without any form of competition, the results brought by such students may be a cursory one since there was no motivation for doing it.
Also, some people may argue that cooperation fosters teamwork. This is a definitely a good thing as being able to work in a team can be said to be vital in todays world but who is to say that competition does not foster teamwork? Competition can foster teamwork if people were put in groups to work together to compete against other people working together in other groups.
In conclusion, there is a need for competition to be instilled in young people as there are more pros to competition than only cooperation in young people.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... project where students are asked to do a research on a topic, and the person with the mos...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68631578947 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6713624399 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450526315789 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4230907466 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.125 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6875 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 5.21951772744 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268304208405 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098858908082 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672020034747 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174570963867 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665519572535 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
... project where students are asked to do a research on a topic, and the person with the mos...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 58.6224719101 128% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2226.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 475.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68631578947 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6713624399 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450526315789 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.9 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.4230907466 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.125 118.986275619 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6875 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 5.21951772744 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268304208405 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098858908082 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672020034747 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174570963867 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665519572535 0.0667264976115 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.