The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
In nature, there are so many animal groups what live together. When these animal groups are scrutinized, one can see the benefits as acting as a group. Wolves hunt together and how they cooperate during hunthing is very prevalent. Every member has a task. Monkeys are a well know example of commune living. They cooperate in almost every situation. It can be seen that one member is on the lookout to warn the other members of the group. This is are all examples of cooperation. Wihout cooperation, it would be impossible to survive for some of these groups. Human beings are the same way. All the evolutional evidence suggests that we are social beings and we have survived this long by cooperation. In today's world, cooperation is ever present and can be seen everywhere. The winners are the ones who know how to cooperate.
Companies are one of those entities that they compete with one another, yet, to survive, they need to teach cooperation to their employees within. There are a plethora of trainings for companies to teach this critical skill to its employees. Over and over, good managers always tell their team to cooperate with coworkers. Cooperation is sharing knowledge. You teach one another and at the end, this is how people thrive, by learning from one another. It would be impossible to learn anything and everything by a single person. This is why we have different jobs. Certain people have different talents. For societies to benefit from these different talents, it is necessary to instill a sense of cooperation into people.
From the evolutional standpoint, it has been proven, over and over, that the unity of certain animals helped them survive many hardships. Animal world is full of these examples. In Antartica, penguins stay close to each other to protect themselves from the harsh winters. Whales live and sleep together to protect themselves from the predators. Wolves hunt in such a harmony that their behavior is almost equivalent to the word cooperation. Birds fly together in a such a way that they try to reduce the air resistance by rotating spots during long distant flying. Many animal herds keep a member awake to protect them from the possible dangers that may come from the predators. Monkeys are the perfect example of living in harmony and cooperation. They live in groups and cooperate within the same group.
It is impossible to think of humanity without the act of cooperation. It exists in every substrata. A country, company, family, and etc. always cooperate within. One might argue that there is always a competition between people and it is deeply embedded in our brains to compete with one another. This might be true yet competition is usually over scarce resources fought by different groups. These groups still cooperate within to win the competition. Nothing obviates the need for cooperation. It means standing together, supporting each other, teaching one another, and carrying each other a step forward. This is why the young people should be taught to cooperate properly. If a society wants to advance, they need to bring a sense of unity. A divided, constantly competing society won't be able to get anyhere. A society needs harmony not constant war with each other.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... substrata. A country, company, family, and etc. always cooperate within. One might argu...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2696.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9741697417 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66338877982 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476014760148 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 44.0 20.2370786517 217% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0920357773 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2727272727 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3181818182 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 4.83258426966 476% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174803314993 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387609859465 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447386530709 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10964671174 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555588726933 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... substrata. A country, company, family, and etc. always cooperate within. One might argu...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2696.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9741697417 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66338877982 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 215.323595506 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476014760148 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 851.4 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 6.24550561798 320% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 44.0 20.2370786517 217% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0920357773 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2727272727 118.986275619 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3181818182 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.681818181818 5.21951772744 13% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 23.0 4.83258426966 476% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174803314993 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387609859465 0.0831039109588 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447386530709 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10964671174 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555588726933 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 14.1392134831 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.8971910112 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.