Youth is the answer to the future, They are leaders, enterpreneurs, scientists of tomorrow and it is in their hands, that lies the answer to our future. Hence, it is our duty to guide & coach the young ones to face challenges and prepare them for what lies ahead. The author asserts that the best way we can prepare our young people for leadership in goverment, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition. I stand firmly with authors point as a better future can only be biuild when we have a sense of cooperation and empathy toward each other.
Terrorism, global warming, malnutrition are some of the many global issues, that is perplexing some the best minds of today. These issues cannot be solved by an individual or a country alone. Countries across the globe need to collaborate together to fight against these evils and bring out a successfull plan of action. Hence, it is very much important for the leader of these countries to be cooperative and help each other in making a better future.
Personal goals can only be acheived if we pursue our personal goals keeping in align with the group goal. If every individual in a team tries to attain his personal goal, not caring about what is beneficial for the group, then none in the group can succeed.
For example, for a team which is trying to build a bridge on a river, it is very important for them to work collaborately to to build it else they will not succeed.
Some may argue that competition is necessary to acheive success as it keeps a person moving and gives a target to acheive. I agree to it but too much of competition can sometimes give rise to acrimony. In such a situation, it will lead to failure of the cause. Also when there is too much of a competition, then the one who is less privilidged tend suffer.
Hence, I agree that the best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in various sectors is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not compitition
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...orism, global warming, malnutrition are some of the many global issues, that is perplexing ...
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Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...mportant for them to work collaborately to to build it else they will not succeed. ...
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Line 8, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...else they will not succeed. Some may argue that competition is necessary to acheiv...
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Line 8, column 262, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., it will lead to failure of the cause. Also when there is too much of a competition...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21608040201 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.153266331658 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0804020100503 0.0880659088768 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0527638190955 0.0497285424764 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0678391959799 0.0444667217837 153% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.118090452261 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0251256281407 0.0406280797675 62% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.6545399862 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0452261306533 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00251256281407 0.0016655270985 151% => OK
Determiners: 0.108040201005 0.0997080785238 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226130653266 0.0249443105267 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175879396985 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2019.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 364.0 452.878318584 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5467032967 6.0361032391 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.296703296703 0.366273622748 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.18956043956 0.280924506359 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.131868131868 0.200843997647 66% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0989010989011 0.132149295362 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6545399862 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505494505495 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 53.8703123673 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.75 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0284940958 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1875 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5625 0.674092028746 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 41.706043956 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.3119266055 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.49486043649 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129427553489 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0798129317353 0.077325440228 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.616321851576 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.187186978127 0.149214159877 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191591349372 0.161403998019 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144865055536 0.0892212321368 162% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.21694042379 0.385218514788 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0940481082874 0.0692045440612 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302526515124 0.275328986314 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134204063551 0.0653680567796 205% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.30420353982 132% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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