The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation and not competition
Many great leaders have reached their stature, by great deal of determination and perseverance. these characteristics make them stand out in huge crowds of power-hungry people. The prompt suggests that young people should be instilled with a feeling of cooperation, rather than competition, in order to project themselves as suitable competent leaders of various organizations in the future. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this suggestion that promoting a nature of collaboration and unity, will prove to be a more rewarding experience for their development, rather than that of competition and rivalry.
To begin with, leaders of large corporations need to have excellent rigour and thoroughness, to be able to command such a large group of people. To be able to wield such attributes, these leaders need to be seen as visionaries, to be able create a culture where ideas can flourish and discussions result in definite impactful outputs. And with an ever growing market, where innovations are always on the rise and new companies really hit the ground running, it is vital that these leaders are able to instill a competitive spirit in their employees. For instance, taking the American space dream would not have become a reality,unless the leaders of america felt that they were being vanquished in the space Race by the russians. this competitive spirit in these government leaders thrusted to act immediately and thereby, kicking off a series of events in america's space history,which need know talking about. The above example illustrates that if these didn't have a feeling of rivalry and spirit of competition, they would have really been lagging behind the russians. Thus, it is really important that young people are able to apprehend the feeling of competition,and channelise it to the growth of their organisation.
Of course, some will argue that our increasingly changing world, there is possibility of wide collaboration, as a stupefying number of ideas are given grounds and capital to flourish. However, instilling a spirit of competition in our young people, will naturally teach them to think on their feet, and utilise their resources wisely, and ensure that their ideas see the light of the day, whilst making any necessary collaborations, that will be needed to make their vision come true.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, still, thus, for instance, of course, talking about, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 373.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25469168901 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05143773859 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552278820375 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.9079864762 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.769230769 118.986275619 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6923076923 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0909521321635 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332211461728 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295764505351 0.0758088955206 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.067354559828 0.150359130593 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020784074074 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.1392134831 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.