The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government,industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Leadership is the most important aspect for sucess in all the fields including government and industry. A good leader shapes the future of organization and as well as people around him. A leader must have a sense of cooperation as well a sense of healthy competition.
First and foremost quality a leader should posses is to cooperate, understand the people of the group he or she is leading. Nobody gets the quality of a leader by birth. It has to be learnt. In this 21st century almost all the fields are becoming competetive. Children are taught to be competetive right from the primary school.
I strongly agree to the statement that a leader should be instilled with the sense of cooperation and not competition. For example if a captain of basket ball team tries to score more points by himself by competing with his own team the team may not win even if captain manages to score maximum points. Where as if a captain cooperates with the team and develops a good coordination among players possibility of winning is more.
However a leader should have a sense of healthy competition which will in turn brings up a leader to be better at his/her work. When a leader has a overly competetive mind he/she will try to bring down their opponents instead to win over their opponents. When it comes to government a leader should be open minded and cooperative to the concerns raised by opposition political party. If a leader is overly concerned about competition that might make them to take a bad decision also. For example during the test cricket match between
Australia and south aftrica captain of the Australian team Steave Smith tried to tamper the ball so that it will help them to bowl out the opposition quickly later which became a dark spot in his cricketing career.
Finally I conclude that sense of cooperation should be instilled in a leader not competition unless the competition is a healthy one
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, so, still, well, as to, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75975975976 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72882273161 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522522522523 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.6006636327 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2352941176 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121372646665 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417756865253 0.0831039109588 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452054275004 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684180365727 0.150359130593 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522075925524 0.0667264976115 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.