The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
environment">environmental problems have been hot topics in 21st centuries for quite long time. With more and more people living in the world, we see large amounts of consumer - genreated waste spreading in towns and cities. To solve such environment">environmental problems, the speaker advises to impose strict limits on the amount of trash accepted from household. However this might not be able to achieve ideal reault, might lead to negative effects to environments.
Firstly, limitation is likely to force households to find other alternative ways to dispose their trash, which might be less environment">environmentally friendly.
Secondly, other possible ways like recycling education and encounragement would have a much larger impact than rudly placing limitations on residents. For big cities, govements are advised to invest money and human resources to recycle trashes and adopt measures to encourange its residents to classify transhes and place in appropriate dusbins to reduce environment">environmental harm.
In conclusion, considering increasing human activities, it is not practical to only rely on setting limitations on household trashes to solve environment">environmental problems from consumers, also such limitations would bring additional problems to environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Environment&apos
environment'>environmental problems have been hot t...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'imposing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'advise' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: imposing
...ronmental problems, the speaker advises to impose strict limits on the amount of trash ac...
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Line 1, column 379, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...mount of trash accepted from household. However this might not be able to achieve ideal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1143.0 2235.4752809 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 442.535393258 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24590163934 5.05705443957 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.07958577397 2.79657885939 182% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715846994536 0.4932671777 145% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.394332255 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.875 118.986275619 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.4991977007 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.21951772744 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308426941486 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130176840721 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106406684615 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181166754519 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773815155325 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 14.1392134831 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 48.8420337079 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.27 12.1639044944 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.25 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 100.480337079 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.