The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones.
The claim states states that the best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones, at first it may seem to be agreeing upon but on observing the latter part which says "ignoring the negative ones" seems to be quiet unacceptable.I would choose to explain this claim in my disagreement to it. A teacher is that physical entity, who teaches us right from our time we enter in this world. Almost all of us regard that our parents are the very first teachers.They are the ones who make us capable to differentiate between good and evil, and at times in our childhood we all have been attentive to the praises they used for our small achievement just like even a picking up of glass was kind of accomplishment for us.
Moreover, at some point of time, it is too naive of some parents that they cherish the faults of their offspring just so as not to spoil the mood of their little ones. This inculcates the unfavorable habit in some children as they grow up, there may be a possibility that such over-pampered and overdose of love may be the reason for their children's impractical behavior, such situations can be handled in a right way if proper directions are not led to the child. However, it may be acceptable that early praises to the positive actions prove to be good , for example, if someone has begin to learn to guitar, there are many learning aspects of guitar such as holding the guitar, position of fingers on fret-board, strumming pattern, the guitar instructor might ignore some minor flaws in a beginner guitar student and can explain them later once the student is confident with some major and initial aspects of learning guitar.This illustrates that sometimes praising the positive actions does favor to gain the student's interest into the chosen field rather than just pointing out the flaws abruptly in the early stages of learning.
Furthermore, a teacher always has the responsibility to make the students capable to survive in this competitive world, not only responsible for nurturing the student's interest in the subjects but also to shape the student's attitude in a positive and optimistic way.Teacher shall find new ways of teaching in order to make student's gain interest in a particular subject, For example, teaching of periodic table in Chemistry can be taught by making the abbreviations of the elements in the form of small musical notes. Such measures taken by teacher can be helpful for student to learn with more interest.While focusing on the students which are excelling in their academic profile, it is equally important to focus on the ones who are not doing far better, the flaws of such students has to be analyzed by the teacher , because student spends maximum time in the school, college, and due to the current world conditions where both mother and father are working, it is difficult to observe such limitations of their children.Therefore, it is advisable that the teachers shall guide the parents too regarding the negative changes in the behavior of their children.
Nowadays, parents prefer educational institutes which has good teaching faculty and better schooling atmosphere.As such stratified requirements are often considered by the parents before admitting their children to the institutions. The feedback of everyday activities shall also be updated with the parents via mail or personal meetings with the concerned faculty. Some time , a student may dislike the open insult in front of the class and this may lead to adversely affect the student psychologically, mostly in the cases of sensitive students, therefore their negative behavior shall be discussed with that student's parents as to find some permanent solution and find any difficulties faced by the student. Such methods can also be useful in developing the student's behavior with the help of teachers and this not only helps in putting the student in the right directions but also saves from undue academic loss.
Lastly, one of the most addressable facts regarding the best ways of teaching is that, the teachers spend more time with students and build a reputation with the students and may observe more keenly and point out the negative actions more accurately. For an instance, a student has excelled in an examination and later on it is observed that the student is now overconfident regarding the upcoming examinations and has not been working in the same way like that for the previous ones, so such observations of a student can help the teacher to warn the student about the approach towards the exams, this may also lead to egoistic issues in between the students and teacher but praising and criticizing both has to be balanced by a teacher appropriately and I personally think such balanced teaching is the best way of teaching.
- College student should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. 50
- College student should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field. 50
- Government shoudl offer college and unviersity education free of charge to all students. 70
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study. 50
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore the negative ones. 50
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'lastly', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in the same way']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217948717949 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.162004662005 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.108391608392 0.0880659088768 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0547785547786 0.0497285424764 110% => OK
Pronouns: 0.037296037296 0.0444667217837 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.132867132867 0.12292977631 108% => OK
Participles: 0.0477855477855 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83037649633 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.034965034965 0.030933414821 113% => OK
Particles: 0.002331002331 0.0016655270985 140% => OK
Determiners: 0.123543123543 0.0997080785238 124% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.02331002331 0.0249443105267 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00815850815851 0.0148568991511 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 4812.0 2732.02544248 176% => OK
No of words: 807.0 452.878318584 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96282527881 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.32989168958 4.58838876751 116% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342007434944 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.293680297398 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206939281289 0.200843997647 103% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10780669145 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83037649633 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 357.0 219.290929204 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442379182156 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 58.2129585889 55.4138127331 105% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6194690265 68% => OK
Sentence length: 57.6428571429 23.380412469 247% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 181.973100165 59.4972553346 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.714285714 141.124799967 244% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.6428571429 23.380412469 247% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 0.674092028746 191% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 87.0108868826 51.4728631049 169% => OK
Elegance: 1.56880733945 1.64882698954 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.511194349302 0.391690518653 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.209281352442 0.123202303941 170% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0751639787136 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.69699552801 0.547984918172 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.163582216597 0.149214159877 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.254703221901 0.161403998019 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140343789936 0.0892212321368 157% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.582680839308 0.385218514788 151% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0727542018268 0.0692045440612 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391107378958 0.275328986314 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743058678955 0.0653680567796 114% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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