In this world, if parents want to teach childrens they should praise positive actions and ignore negative ones because positive actions talk more than negative. It is true that many people often learn through negatives actions but i agree with this recommendation, the best way to teach is to accolade positives actions and ignore negative. I will support my argument with three reasons as positive actions are the best way to teach people, also good actions allows to help others and a nation, finally positives actions are never forgotten by people.
First of all, futur will be build by children and the best manner to teach to children is to prone good actions through of their area. Children understand and practice quickly when they are still young, so they can easily practice what people teach them. For instance, if the nation want to see the best future and governements do not teach to people how to work hard, how to find or to build their life through of their studies, and prefer to show negative actions as war etc. theses childs will grow with a lazy mentality. But if the nation continue to give a well being to population by offering a job, an opportinuty to build themselves by a loans and others, we would have a best world.
Secondly, positive actions allows to help others and develop the nation because of theses actions, many people will know the country and tourists would come to see the nation, and it would help to increase the economy and to attract more tourists. Also, it can be help others if people were afraid to support an opinion because of the laws or the rules establised in the country. We have the case of Nelson Mandela, who proned a FREEDOM and through of theses positive actions, many people have known South Africa as the country of Nelson.
However, while positive actions is the best way to teach, negative actions can also teach people. Many people often prefer to be teaching when someone fails on something. Negative actions help to people to be better because they learn through of these experiment and tomorrow, would build something better.
As a result, our future depend on how positive actions are evaluated and tought to others to develop the best future.
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- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and su 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'helping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: helping
... teach people, also good actions allows to help others and a nation, finally positives ...
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...fer to show negative actions as war etc. theses childs will grow with a lazy ment...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, for instance, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.796875 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35849528301 2.79657885939 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455729166667 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8286117764 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.8 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 5.21951772744 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214923648547 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896118121984 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812169425774 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13978062305 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833874137441 0.0667264976115 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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