The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
As an orthodox Chinese idiom once stated: ‘The achievement of the student is thanks to a strict teacher’, an ideology underpinning critical standard is the key of success which I strongly support with. However, dependent on the students characteristic and capacity, there exists no single uniform method to be considered the best way. From my opinion, the philosophy of teaching goes beyond the consideration only on positive or negative actions of the student. On the contrary, the duty of education is to bestow students with the capability to distinguish the right from wrong. From there, they would be able to learn and grow from their mistakes.
Since the statement did not make a clear distinction on whether we are discussing about vocational learning or formal education, I would take it from a general approach. Given the complexity of education, teachers should yield the balance between providing encouraging applause and productive criticism. As I stated above, the rationale behind is to enable students to recognize the positive and negative impact of their own action, which gear them towards maturing in a particular field. For the twelve-year formal education, if a student is only praised whenever they do well in the test but was never punished by cheating in the exam. So what is a better explanation than we are encouraging students to engage in misconducts and violation. If the situation persists, their sense of judgement could be completely deteriorated.
I am also a strong believe on ‘failure is the mother of success’. Had you never fail, you would never learn how to do it right. Teaching does not just happen in school or in any formalized framework. We could further elaborate this point with an example of president Washington with the apple tree. If it was not for his father’s guiding on developing courage and honesty to admit faults at his young age, he would have not been transformed in to a great leader of the America. Therefore, by confronting our negative characters, not only are we able to amend it in time but it also ingrains the virtue quality for us to grow better as a person. Also, people seem to find strength and resilience every time they tumble. Looking at the case of Jack Ma, one of the most successful entrepreneurs globally, who got rejected by Harvard for 15 times. Thanks to Harvard for pointing out that he is not good enough for the school, it pushed Jack to continue fighting to accredit and prove himself to the world.
However, one might argue that teachers should focus more on the positive traits instead of pointing out errors from the students. With the evident provided about, the advantage of bringing up flaws in a person is not all bad. However, we do have to consider the mental capacity and emotional quality of a person as some people might be vulnerable to judgement. If such circumstances occur, educators should search for an appropriate strategy to deliver the message without hurting personal ego. For instance, methods such as personal consultation or peers’ advice might be useful tools to avoid public humiliation and emotional intrusion.
In summary, as I cogently elaborated above, there is no ‘best way’ to teach. However, only praising good conducts and avoiding mistake is definitely not the ideal solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 239, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...ly deteriorated. I am also a strong believe on 'failure is the mother of succe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in summary, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 84.0 58.6224719101 143% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2805.0 2235.4752809 125% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92730717089 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 215.323595506 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 882.9 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2271007353 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.888888889 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3703703704 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.74074074074 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170503548308 0.243740707755 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380863140132 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0382490188422 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084616155278 0.150359130593 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251261543117 0.0667264976115 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 158.0 100.480337079 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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