The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
In the mordern generation there is no differences between men and women related tasks. Men and women can work on the specified task equally. There is no barrier that men should do only specified task and women should do some other specified task.
In current generation men and women are equally suited to perform a task. In IT industries we can see that the task which are assigned to men are also assigned to women, no differences are made between men and women. In other feilds like banbking, telecommunication etc there is no discrimination between men and women. While working for a task inherent physical differences doesn't matter, what matters is how skilled a person is on a perticular feild.
Eventhough in olden days there was discrimination between men and women now the discrimination has been overcomed by the current generation. In olden days men should do only the farm land related work and women should do only home related work but as time passed, men and women are able to perform both the works equally.
To sum it up, Men and women can perform the tasks equally irrespective of their inherent physical differences. Eventhough there are some impedences for both men and women in some tasks, they need to overcome it and work together.
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- The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models. 33
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. 33
- A recent study of eighteen rhesus monkeys provides clues as to the effects of birth order on an individual's levels of stimulation. The study showed that in stimulating situations (such as an encounter with an unfamiliar monkey), firstborn infant monkeys 23
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could 50
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are no differences'?
Suggestion: there are no differences
In the mordern generation there is no differences between men and women related tasks. Me...
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Line 3, column 218, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erences are made between men and women. In other feilds like banbking, telecommuni...
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Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...or a task inherent physical differences doesnt matter, what matters is how skilled a p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 2235.4752809 47% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87906976744 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80471672568 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 215.323595506 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455813953488 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.80107094 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121768690078 0.243740707755 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065196325712 0.0831039109588 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0255313778724 0.0758088955206 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892679616449 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0071994500653 0.0667264976115 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 100.480337079 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.