Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In a society there are lot of problems that need to be adressed. Now the question arises how to focus on this problems. Here scandals play a very important role on focusing our attention on these problems. I completely agree with the statement “Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could”.
First of all we should know what are scandals? Scandals can be defined as doing morally wrong on the perticular field which outbursts the public. In India “Vijay Malya” is famous for his kingfisher scandel. He cheated the government around 9000 crores and fly to UK. This scandal made everyone to focus on the scandal.
There are scandals which disturb our activities. For example sex scandal of Malyalam actors made every one to focus on the problem. As media always want to improvre their TRP they show these sex scandals from morning to night. It may affect the chidren life because they will start searching about the sex. So media should potray these news in a carefull way.
A reformer is one who makes the changes in a perticular field in a good way. For example, in a village, if the people are facing the water problems, a reformer will collect the money from all the people of the village and invest it in a borvel. Which solves the water problem of the villages.
Speaker speaks about the general issues which people are facing in the society, but he fails to attract the media. Media will not showcase such speaker. If the speaker approch the media for their help to solve the problem of the society media willl reject the speaker by saying that there is no content in this news. Now a days media are running behind the scandals because they want inflamatory news which will increase their TRP.
To finally sum it up, Scandals focus our attention because scandals are the inflamatory news were media will potray all day. It will also focus our attention on the society problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, for example, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 343.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7667638484 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4431278136 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507288629738 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.606002648 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0869565217 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.9130434783 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82608695652 5.21951772744 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 17.0 5.13820224719 331% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442176178426 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114752581489 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121089059604 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226773592692 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151900303603 0.0667264976115 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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