"The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines."
A society's image largely depends on the male or female leaders. The prompt recommends that we can evaluate its character by judging the heroic figures it choose. I mostly agree to this conclusion for two reasons. Futhermore, due to one particular reason I propose this not as entirely logical.
First of all, when we choose a human being as our hero or heroines, its because we idolize that person. we tend to follow his or her footsteps. Therefore, if we see that a heroic figure of a society is pretty decent and an honest and sagacious human that means the other menbers of society follow him or her. In addition to that, we can acknowledge that they are on the right path and we can believe their dicernment as well. In contrast to that, if we see the society is cosidering a reprobate and turpitude person as their model, we can undoubtedly presume this whole society as an unethical one as well.
Secondly, a hero or a leader is the one who represents the society on the behalf of everyone. that leader has some responsibilities for his or her society. For instance,a leader has to take care of the overall situation including social,cultural,infrastructural and other aspects. if any kinds of problem arise, everyone looks upon him. so judging the way how he or she handle the situation helps to generalize the society's image sometimes.
On the contary, these are not always true. sometimes, the process of choosing a hero is a corrupted one. Nowadays, corruption has become so pervasive. The society's human beings have to choose their hero out of impulse. Then we may not able consider this as a standard for evaluation if its one of the reasons.
To recapitulate, I agree that the assertion made by the prompt may be a efficient way but sometimes it is not. we have to careful in this regard as evaluation is a important matter.
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- The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its heroines 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...an evaluate its character by judging the heroic figures it choose. I mostly agree...
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...acter by judging the heroic figures it choose. I mostly agree to this conclusion for ...
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... a human being as our hero or heroines, its because we idolize that person. we tend...
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...decent and an honest and sagacious human that means the other menbers of society ...
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...ubtedly presume this whole society as an unethical one as well. Secondly, a he...
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...problem arise, everyone looks upon him. so judging the way how he or she handle th...
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...n him. so judging the way how he or she handle the situation helps to generalize the s...
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...the contary, these are not always true. sometimes, the process of choosing a hero is a c...
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...true. sometimes, the process of choosing a hero is a corrupted one. Nowadays, cor...
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... efficient way but sometimes it is not. we have to careful in this regard as evalu...
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Suggestion: an
...careful in this regard as evaluation is a important matter.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73374613003 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09224233161 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4377184994 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8095238095 118.986275619 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202204979594 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0558334171463 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593656130581 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106851745302 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460637294706 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 14.1392134831 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.