Leadership is vital to the success of any enterprise, whether it is in business, politics, education or government fields. It is argued that in any field, those in power should step down after five years. I can't totally agree with this argument, change is not always for the best.
The claim that the surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership is not true. Some leaders with great experience and creative thinking, Who might reach the apogee of experience and knowledge, furthermore, they win the confidence of their people through years, can't be replaced with new leaders just for the power of change. New leaders will take time to gain the same experience and to comprehend the core values and missions of the system. This might hinder the progress of the system. For instance, we can ask a successful and dedicated school principal, who has a comprehensive knowledge of the school system and a phenomenal leadership experience, to step down after five years and replace him with a new principal who will start from zero.
Controversy, some may argue that the New leaders work with tremendous vigor. They can revive the system with new ideas, different problem-solving techniques, and innovative technologies. This kind of change is crucial because of the rapid development of new technologies, new inventions and new theories these days. This can be attained by getting the suitable assistance and the continuous updates of leadership knowledge to cope with the developing technologies.
Leaders may tend to misuse their authority while in power because of the reduced fear of accountability. For example, many countries presidents became dictators when they stayed in their positions for long terms. This problem can be overcome by the effective accountability and system audits. for instance, Congress in the USA has the authority of impeaching the president and question his authority.
At last, the power of change is important for any enterprise, but we can't make a general rule that every leader should step down after a period of time.
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- Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your 54
- Governments should place few, if any, restrictions on scientific research and development. 66
- 12 Governments should offer a free university education to any student who has been admitted to a university but who cannot afford the tuition 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 208, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...er should step down after five years. I cant totally agree with this argument, chang...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...nfidence of their people through years, cant be replaced with new leaders just for t...
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Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...tive accountability and system audits. for instance, Congress in the USA has the a...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...is important for any enterprise, but we cant make a general rule that every leader s...
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Line 9, column 138, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t every leader should step down after a period of time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 339.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2005899705 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9455248491 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52802359882 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.1176470588 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35880621727 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118606002279 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155892549576 0.0758088955206 206% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208105253698 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14570409428 0.0667264976115 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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