Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
I wholly support the claim that in any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.
Our system for administration has gone through a lot chnages since the ancient times. First the responsibilities of politics,education,governance was held
by the leader of the state that used to be the king/monarch. With the advent of democracy, people began to elect their own governments and policy makers. This has brought about a welcome change in the society.
Firstly talikng about the field of business. The majority of corporations have a board of governors who are elected in a cycle of 3-4 years. This helps the company
to bring in new perspective in the company. Often the board is reshuffled to include more diverse and inclusive demographic. Too much of workload for a long time burns out the human mind and renders the indivisual less effective. There are so many examples of companies not able to keep up with the changing scenario and folding because of lack of vision and resistance to reform.
Beside from business, we can see the government being formed every 4-5 years. Too much of power corrupts leaders hence they should step down to make way for new ones. India is an excellent example of the development being accelerated because of the goevrnment changing. The new government strives to complete its election propoganda thus benefitting the people. This also empowers people to boot out ineffective government and elect new leaders .
Education is the most dynamic field in our era. With new technologies being developed and more branches of study being discovered, being on top of the game has become imperative. The heads of education institutes are often swamped with tasks of running the place, they dont have much time to update themselves. With every batch of students filing in, the pschye of the students also changes. The student activities organised 5 years ago might not be relevant to the students studying today. Even a change in power in student councils is a need. The new student representatives can highlight relevant problems that their seniors might not have expirienced.
To summarise, Change is the rule of the universe. Any social/political machinery cannot work efficiently if the parts are not changed regularly. A fresh perspective
can help in solving a lot of stuck ups, diversity can give new perspective and hence in any field, those in power should pave way for their successors.
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 75
- The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority. 66
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. 50
- Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the numbe 83
- Claim: In any field—business, politics, education, government—those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
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Suggestion: institute
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 405.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15802469136 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20097843671 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567901234568 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5020936968 60.3974514979 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.3461538462 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5769230769 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57692307692 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.97078651685 181% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275437024717 0.243740707755 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667125600529 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116441689969 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143312831585 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171090598232 0.0667264976115 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.1392134831 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.8420337079 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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