Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
For nearly as far as time has gone art has been the first ever expression of human emotion. It is the one language that is universally understood, appreciated and emoted. With the progression of time, art has evolved into many branches and so has its admirers. For art to thrive, it needs to be supported and encouraged. I agree with the idea of the government supporting art and artists to flourish.
Patrons of art although are very active but sadly are very few. Only prominent artists can find themselves in the good favour of their patrons. The young artists have a tough time funding their work. The government can play a vital part in providing financial impetus to such artists. Students are given scholarships to pursue art for higher studies. Also the government has set up cultural centers in every city for encouraging art and has built state of art infrastructure to make it available to the masses. There is a notion that authority kills art. Many artists have been forced to flee their countries because of their radical views . This although is sad but is also a victim of unfortunate circumstances. The government of the country has many times with change of power granted priviledges to these artists.
A nation is made up of different people and so is the art of that region. In the medival times, the patrons of art were the rulers of the kingdoms. They used to send artists across countires to explore new places and learn new styles. In todays scenario the government has become the the representation of the people. It has the most outreach within the nation and abroad . With its tremendous resources that can be allotted towards developing art, the government also plays keen role in revival of dying artforms. For instance the Government of India has done an excellent job in giving tribal artists of India a stage to showcase their artform by the means of several welfare schemes. Many other countries have set up similar initiatives to revive dying art indegenous to them. The regular showcase of talent through various government controlled mediums such as television and radio has made art accessible to all and increased its reach to the masses.
To sum it up art can be flourished and enjoyed through combined efforts of artists as well as the authorities. It is the duty of the government not to restrict the creativity of the artist and let his/her art flow. The artist on the other hand should take the most advantage of all the facilities made available so that his/her artform thrives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 434.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83870967742 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71119932893 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511520737327 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2085109618 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0740740741 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347480721615 0.243740707755 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093810854805 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064231749068 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220527486657 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163822538898 0.0667264976115 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 100.480337079 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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