Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
Heroes and role models are actually ideals of a society because they give motivation to society about to happen change. hence, by examining the character of men and women, it is possible to understand character of a society.
First of all, Heroes are only those who tries to change the social problems as well as to protect any country or place. If people take motivation from army officers, who are actually heroes by serving their nation and combating to enemies of country, society can learn valueable quality of patriotism. Even women, who also serves in military for nation, can also become ideal for women to encourage them to join army. people can understand the importance of national security if they have patriotism.
Secondly, Sportspersons, who plays a vital role in playing from district level to national level can also be ideals to people. the society who admires the desire and assiduous efforts of sportsplayer, learns many qualities like team leadership from team captains, hardwork and sportsman spirit, teamwork and many more. Thus, those who follows sportsplayer, can understand these qualities which are at utmost importance in daily life also.
Thirdly, sometimes, even if people follow role models and heroes, they does not seem decorous. They admits crimes, shows falsehood and tries to harm the welfare of the society. For instance, even if people takes ideals who are against corruption, people do the corruption and hence loots poor people.
In sum, To understand the society, it should have ideals from whom they should get motivated to fight against crimes and for the wellbeing and prosperty of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence
...tion to society about to happen change. hence, by examining the character of men and ...
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Suggestion:
...xamining the character of men and women, it is possible to understand character o...
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Suggestion: People
...r women to encourage them to join army. people can understand the importance of nation...
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Suggestion: The
...nal level can also be ideals to people. the society who admires the desire and assi...
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Suggestion:
...sportsplayer, learns many qualities like team leadership from team captains, hard...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... are at utmost importance in daily life also. Thirdly, sometimes, even if people ...
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Suggestion: do
...ple follow role models and heroes, they does not seem decorous. They admits crimes, ...
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Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'admit'
Suggestion: admit
...roes, they does not seem decorous. They admits crimes, shows falsehood and tries to ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for instance, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 33.0505617978 36% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 266.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18045112782 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61405551262 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 215.323595506 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3111563308 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 5.21951772744 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219301575473 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841073727527 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969348999754 0.0758088955206 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149024940372 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164538015377 0.0667264976115 247% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.1639044944 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.