Claim: The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Reason: Heroes and role models reveal a society's highest ideals.
The author of the statement claim that in order to understand the characteristics of society, one must examine the character of the heroes or role model of the society. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time while others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight the point against of the claim of the author and will provide sound reasoning for the same.
Societies are not a singular entities, they are the mixtures of various belief, culture, language and many more. So, if someone want to understand the society characteristics, they have to study or examine the society as whole, not by examine few people who are considered to be as heroes of the societies. There is no deny, they heroes or the role model belong to society and they did really good hard work with positive attitude to reach to the pinnacle, but one cannot say with surety that the beliefs of societies will be same as the society itself.
Furthermore, the heroes or role model have gone through the various like good and bad phase of the life and they have better experience of the life as compared to the ordinary one, so, there is high possibility that their belief might have also changed and their beliefs and their societies beliefs are now pole apart, for example, if person from very conservative family and society where girls are not allowed to go out and it is to be believed that the man are way more superior then women and a person from such family later in his or her life became successful and realize that whatever their society believe is totally absurd, now if you examine their character in the assumption that understanding his or her character will be same as like understanding the society character, then they are actually committing mistake and they will failed in their motives.
Last but not the least, by examine heroes character one may get the glimpse of the society character but the actual reality, it just like the trailer of a movies which will give you a little idea about the movie like whether is a thriller or comedy drama but not the real intention or the topic of the movie, which we will get when we see the movie. But in contrast to all the above mentioned point, we have some certain exceptions also, like in India, the Bollywood star Salman Khan give raise to the trend of body building through his movies and interviews in his country and many of the India citizen including the another Bollywood superstar Hrithik start working on their body or try to be in the good shape.
In conclusion, Not only the role model should be examined but the normal person should also be examined because society doesn't consist of only heroic people, there are many normal people as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'entity'?
Suggestion: entity
...e same. Societies are not a singular entities, they are the mixtures of various belie...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... language and many more. So, if someone want to understand the society characteristi...
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Line 5, column 308, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'poled'.
Suggestion: poled
...efs and their societies beliefs are now pole apart, for example, if person from very...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...eved that the man are way more superior then women and a person from such family lat...
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Line 5, column 841, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...tually committing mistake and they will failed in their motives. Last but not the l...
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Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a movie' or simply 'movies'?
Suggestion: a movie; movies
...al reality, it just like the trailer of a movies which will give you a little idea about...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...should also be examined because society doesnt consist of only heroic people, there ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2245.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 482.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65767634855 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42137515194 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470954356846 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 729.0 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 217.089866184 60.3974514979 359% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 224.5 118.986275619 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 48.2 23.4991977007 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.9 5.21951772744 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303448813113 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130320964907 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932980881473 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170529572787 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671550554055 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 14.1392134831 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 100.480337079 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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