Everyone has someone in their life who they look up to as a hero or a role model. An aspiring footballer might idolize Leo Messi or Ronaldo, cricketers might follow someone like Sachin or Lara, singers might follow Adele or Beyonce. People tend to follow such role models who have achieved great success in their respective field of expertise. But, to examine the character of society depending on the role models they follow is too specious. Every individual is unique, just merely emulating someone's trait does not define their true identity. Due, to this reason I disagree that character of a society can be determined by knowing the role models they follow. The following reasons might help clear this assertion.
Many boys and girls aspire to have an aesthetic body like Hollywood actors and actresses. They even go to the extend to watch their workout videos, follow their dietary plans etc. They idolize their physical traits but this does not indicate the they idolize their character. Perhaps, based on this criteria if a society's character is determined, wouldn't it sound illogical?
Moreover in today's fast paced and materialistic world where appearance, flair and flamboyance are more significant than moral values, the true essence of a person's personality cannot be judged by his role model. For example, in a recent survey done in Japan regarding their most favorite character in the Anime: Naruto, results found that many admired the antagonist; Madara more than the protagonist; Naruto. The reason being children admired the calm and cool traits that the villain showcased. Even though, the children cherish the villain over the hero, this does not mean that the children are more affiliated towards negativity.
Also, as considered that heroes are highest ideals seems ostensible. In the past, there were many famous people like Chester Bennington, Avicci , Robin Williams and many more who had huge fan following, committed suicide. These role models do not represent the highest ideals that the younger generations must be looking for. Though, the reason to their suicide maybe a personal and stressful decision, but the point is none of this is associated to the society's character.
There maybe theories which would support this claim. But, it is important to understand that each individual is unique and brings a unique contribution to the society. If he or she is judged just by knowing the role model he follows would undermine his or her own abilities. In conclusion, the true character of a society may be examined by studying the individual's traits and not by what influences him or her.
- The increasingly rapid pace of life today causes more problems than it solves 50
- The following appeared in the editorial section of a health and fitness magazine In a study of the effects of exercise on longevity medical researchers tracked 500 middle aged men over a 20 year period The subjects represented a variety of occupations 59
- Claim Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed Reason It is inappropriate and perhaps even cruel to use public resources to fund the arts when people s basic needs are not b 80
- The following appeared in a health magazine published in Corpora Medical experts say that only one quarter of Corpora s citizens meet the current standards for adequate physical fitness even though twenty years ago one half of all of Corpora s citizens 78
- Claim The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models Reason Heroes and role models reveal a society s highest ideals 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2199.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 429.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12587412587 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6069974897 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 215.323595506 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561771561772 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0236707769 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6086956522 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.652173913 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261791998196 0.243740707755 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805423359832 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860938245198 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140691292164 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065826980383 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 100.480337079 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.