Claim: The emergence of the online “blogosphere” and social media has significantly weakened the quality of political discourse in the United States.Reason: When anyone can publish political opinions easily, standards for covering news and political topics will inevitably decline.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Political opinions can be published by any person. As everyone have the liberty to publicly announce their opinion about politics, the quality of the news and political topics will be decreased to a greater extent. I mostly agree with this prompt. The essay will be discussing about how the freedom to express about politics abated the lucidness of information.
In some cases people agree that independence of expressing whatever one want can ameliorate the efficiency of information. To make it clear, Let me illustrate with an example of Y. S. Jagan Mohan Reddy the current CM of AP is making efforts to make the capital of AP into Segments. This news was spread all over AP and people protested against it advising that its not a good idea to make it into segments. Many polls were created to express their protest, Media is showcasing this and people who got to know about this also joined hands. As a result of this higher officials ordered him not to do this.
But, in most of the cases information or the news being telecasted is ambiguous due to differences and unequivocalness in the published political opinion. For instance, While the elections were being conducted on March 23rd in AP there were many channels making predictions of who can be the next CM. There were many surveys done and they came up with multiple answers. This created a lot of confusion in people.
There are many other incidents. There may be people who are patial to a person in politics, may be due to his relationship or due to any other factors. He can give false reviews and opinions about the people who are in the opposition part. For an example When CM of Tamilnadu Jayalilitha was dead they blamed their opposition members, but the truth behind it was mysterious. The reality behind it was still in vague.
While some people agree that independence of expression can improve the lucidness of information, in most of the cases it makes unclear. So I mostly agree with this prompt that "freedom to publish people's opinion can make the clarity of information get reduce"
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Political opinions can be published by a...
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...ted the lucidness of information. In some cases people agree that independ...
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...t to know about this also joined hands. As a result of this higher officials order...
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...cials ordered him not to do this. But, in most of the cases information or...
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...his. But, in most of the cases information or the news being telecaste...
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...ted a lot of confusion in people. There are many other incidents. There ma...
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...ny other incidents. There may be people who are patial to a person in politics, may be...
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... who are patial to a person in politics, may be due to his relationship or due to...
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...ity behind it was still in vague. While some people agree that independenc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while, for instance, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74665250677 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518207282913 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5209565512 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5714285714 118.986275619 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145858894506 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0468893361615 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674482325009 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922138346457 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582571665131 0.0667264976115 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 100.480337079 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.